Nooooooooooooooooo! *thinks for a second and takes a breath* ooooooooooooooooo! Why won't she just be with Edward? Why? *sobs*
Also, Edward's a little OOC. I think if he'd come back and found her reasonably happy with a normal human, he would have left her be. It's what he wanted for her, after all.
Andrew is...cool, I guess. I'm sorry, I can't get past his not-Edward-ness.

I actually think you're right...Twilight things and fans are getting way out of hand and its tootallyy stuppiid really! I LOVED your story...Im writing a story that has nothing to do with twilight or vamps and warewolves and I wanna ask you if you wanna help me..soo if you do I cant enough thank you...soo, if you want to say anything please answer mee...

I love your story. I'm just gonna start out with that. It's completely refreshing. Your writing has bounce and life and energy, as opposed to other fics I've regretfully spent time reading. You gave Bella character. You brought back Bella's snarkiness, which we saw for a smidgen of a second before Edward stared her into a sniveling pile of love-struck goo. Twilight was fun until everyone read it and the demand got higher. They weren't the best to begin with, but the moment they stepped into the spotlight and signed the movie, preptastic, half-plastic girl got their talons in it and turned it into a cult. I left Twilight as Twilight is a distinct phase. You imagine yourself with Edward, think Jacob is sweet...and then Breaking Dawn. I'm still contemplating which is the better option: Burning it, or selling it (which is tempting seeing how much money I wasted on it, but without the innate satisfaction of seeing it go up in flames.) ANYWHO, TTHTRTW is a pleasant and refreshing alternative to the oh-so-pitchforkable canon. Good job.

love it... i think this is the second time i picked it up and i am totally glad that i did!

Hm, sucks that your not writing anymore :( I loved this story, and all your others, BUT... I know how you feel. Haha- some of these have gotten unoriginal, sadly. But yours, you should know, were some of the best. Anyway, just wanted to say that I loved this story- loved the whole Andrew thing (Edward coming back and Bella forgiving him has gotten totally overrated on FF anyway). This story made me laugh and want to sing, and I just wanna thank you for writing it :)

aww! i like, just found this story today, and i was like ... hooked!

This is THE only fanfic where i have NOT wanted the ending to be EXB ... and i really hate non-cannons!

but anyways, i loved this, even though you're not writing anymore, and i kinda get it, with the whole breaking-dawn-was-a-pile-of-crap thing, i didn't like it that much either :D

But anyway, just to let you know that this was really good, and im sorry you ended it, but oh well

anyways,

Sarah x

"So," he said, sighing impatiently, "What does Andrew Kingston, the reformed cocaine addict have that I don't?"

well first of all he has his humanity. There i said it!

lol i had to add that, good story

Nice job. I agree with your thoughts on the repeatitive nature of Twilight fanfics. I can't tell you the number of times I started one of the New Moon alternatives where Edward didn't come back, Bella was in a relationship and was in a nice coven, and then ran into Edward or one of the other Cullens. After a little manhandling, a quick kiss and some dazzling, Bella dumps her man and her coven and leaps back into Edward's arms - arg. I always stop reading at that point.

gah.

this is seriously one of the best fucking things i've ever read around here.

brilliant. just brilliant.

lol. I had a fuckin field day with that too. (Jacob imprinting on the demon baby.) Well, actually first I just stared at a wall for like ten minutes, and the question "what?" "why?" "no, really?" kept repeating in my head. I was... distraught.

Just wanted to say I enjoyed this immensely. I didn't think I would, because I totally thought Edward was gonna lose... But oddly enough, I was okay with that. I must say I've come a long way lol.

Anyway I don't even know if you'll ever get this, but this was a really great story. Good job.

"What does Andrew Kingston, the reformed cocaine addict have that I don't?"

Welp. The fecal matter has hit the air circulation device.

Ohohoh shit. He didn't just say that. "Who's selfish, and who's sorry?" If I a boy quoted that to me... Well I'd probably faint.

nike execs house hahah nice shout out - i love the detail.. im not sure if i like the edward and bella situation yet but its an awesome fic.

Great fanfic! It's unfortunate that you won't be writing fanfic for Twilight, because I found you story quite refreshing. I agree with you on the whole Edward/Adonis thing, it is way way to overdone! It's even tiring in the books. But, I really like this story and the inclusion of music, being a huge fan of a lot of what you put into your story and a new of fan of some of the others. I'm glad of the road your Bella character took. She made a life for herself and became her own person. I must say, I imagined in my head Andrew to be of the Brandon Flowers variety as far as looks go, which is not too shabby, but he and Bella made a good fit and I'm glad they ended up together. The only thing lacking toward the end was an inclusion of Ryan and Dylan, it would have been fun to see them again. Well, good luck on your other writings and endeavors. You make an awesome writer!

I totally agree - Breaking Dawn bad piece of fanfic/cop out. I waited in line for that book, and shelled out like 25 bucks for it and it was craptastic. Everything Stephenie Meyer said wouldn't happen did happen. So you know what, I totally respect your decision to quit Twilight - and I know you most likely don't care if I respect your decision or not cause I'm just some random reviewer but good on you. Good luck with your Camp Rock fics and I hope you enjoy your new fandom.