| Reviews for My Emerald Child |
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   WhiteElfElder chapter 11 . 4/18/2019 I get the feeling that a conversation between Master Chief would be something like this: Albus: I know was is for the greater good and you will do as I say. *eye twinkle* John: Return Arcana. Albus: No, he is to go where I decide and do as I decide. John: *click* *bang* *bang* *bang* *bang* |
| Thel310 chapter 1 . 3/21/2019 Can somebody take this story it’s obvious that author is dead or story is dead |
| Greninjaten99 chapter 1 . 3/21/2019 aloha darkangelwp, I love this story so much and hope this story keeps going. I don't care what other people say about this story, it is one of the greatest harry potter/ halo stories I have ever read. have a great day. |
| Aion27 chapter 11 . 2/15/2019 This turned very disappointing in the end. I was perfectly happy with the way this story was going until the author puts Harry into Hogwarts. It turned into a weird almost mystery story because it mentions Powers That Be, Gods, and a bunch of other things that make zero sense whatsoever. The author also changes the way he writes when they put him back into Hogwarts and I hated it. It is a great feel good story for most of this story and then it turns almost slightly dark for no reason. It also doesn't explain things sometimes in the last two chapters it just isn't satisfying like the first chapters. Also, the summery makes you think he is going to be with his Sangheili family but he only stays with them for fives years then he gets taken and spends more time at Hogwarts without them than he does with the Sangheili. Then by the ending of this chapter you see again that nope the Sangheili isn't part of it no they put Master Chief with him instead. It just doesn't make sense at all. I don't like to flame but you really shouldn't read this story past chapter 6 or 7 and even then you might want to stop at chapter 5 because Harry does something that just doesn't make any sense, especially with how protective Teddy is over him. This story starts out well but the last half is just crap in my opinion. I loved it up until chapter 5 pretty much so I am sorry that I hated the last half but it is just the way I feel. |
| levi.hall.9279 chapter 11 . 1/20/2019 Thoroughly enjoyed your story every time I read it eagerly anticipating the chapter and hope you make John’s entrance dramatic |
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/31/2018 Why my heart hurts |
| Woke up to smell the ashes chapter 1 . 6/1/2018 Hmmm... |
| Uberdeathninja chapter 11 . 5/14/2018 this shit dead or what? |
| Joseph Orellana chapter 11 . 9/2/2017 "lets find out" Le 4 years later *still waiting to find out* |
| ReaperDrone chapter 11 . 8/3/2017 sooo good i don't mind the time skips since how he interacts or who were those who he trust in the way he describe them also did this end on a HP/Hr. an rewrite might not be needed more likely a sequel to this is much better after all Arcana is no longer a child but a young man, but hey it's your story so ill ride this to completion like the others before me. |
| Jyx The Berserk chapter 11 . 3/13/2017 4 years mother fucker. 4! I've only found this story the day that i made this review, but god dammit, i need an update! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/1/2016 This is so good and fucking awful at the same time most of its shit but it has the potential to be a great fanfic but that never going to happen because the author has ruined it by making Harry to childish (when he's fucking eleven and with people who are constantly fighting) and lots of other things |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/1/2016 If this is how he fucking goes back to his world I'm immediately fucking dropping this fic |
| Kaidrian Tobias Gaunt chapter 5 . 2/17/2016 they should go to the space store and get some space cheedos |
| Tekurinmoto chapter 11 . 2/2/2016 Love the story |
