this is so good! I am glad to see someone finally addressed the comment beckett made about Lizzie to jack. I am a bit irked the movie left it at that...actually i am a bit irked at a lot that didn't happen in that damn movie!

Oh, fantastic. Funny and dark at the same time. I loved it. God, all of us sparrabethers on should get together and force Disney to re-write AWE...Sparrabeth Style!

~lol, Alexa

Excellent. I wondered what Jack would think when he got back to the Pearl and found that Elizabeth had gone off with Sao Feng.

Are you going to write any more of these? Perhaps one during the climactic scene when the heart gets stabbed, and Jack and Elizabeth fly off to freedom?

Lovely story. Can't say anything bad about it. Loved how very Jack like your diction was. Very in character. Makes me feel much better about how AWE ended.

very well written, i enjoyed your rendition of jack.

Very nice! I'm not a big JE shipper, but I love the mood of this story. Nicely done.

'The filthy, slimy, mangy, turtle-headed twit'... yeah; that's an apt description of out favorite EITC slimeball.

I can easily believe Jack would have such a reaction to Beckett's expressed interest in Elizabeth (though, considering their history, I don't think it would take much to make Jack want to impale the guy.)