Love this story! Keep up the good work!

... this made me cry

... Chapter 24. All I have to say is... I have no words. That's wrong. This is depressing. Nope, kinda wrong too. This is ME! Me and depression go hand and hand. Guess what?

I am pain.

Lol, nope. I'm not pain, I'm JazminTea123, and I can't change my username.

Update this story! Please! It's really good!

Love Dalka! I love her and Genz's sibling relationship! Dalka and Havoc's interactions are even funner to read! Update soon!

This is a great story! Keep it up!

I just read all of this in the span of two days lol it's great! I hope you update soon so we can all see what happens! XD

You know, before that little GIGANTIC TEASE at the end I was just kinda "eh...", but now I'm all "GAAAAAHHH!". What I'm saying is get your editor to start editing!

I'm sorry but when you said you were not following the Brotherhood you lost me. I love your story and characters deeply but I much prefer the way Brotherhood ended.

Please update!

You said to review. So I am.

If you don't update I'll string you by your toes and make you regret not updating? *trying to sound threatening but failing*

I am not even halfway through the story and normally I wait until the most recent chapter to review, however I am enjoying this one so thoroughly that I thought I'd tell you anyway!

The plot is fabulous (I especially love that Dalka wasn't a fangirl when she appeared in Amestris) and as far as grammar and spelling goes, you are spot on! I don't think I have seen a fanfic of this quality in a long time.

I did however find just one error in the beginning of this chapter. Elysia called Dalka 'Nii-san', which means 'big brother', but I think you may have meant to have her call Dalka 'Nee-san', which means big sister. It's not a huge thing, but I just thought I'd let you know :)

Again, wonderful job, and I will talk to you again after I have finished all the chapters you have up :)

I LOVE this story! I also know some German so it made me even more interested in this fic 'cause you included some of the German aspects from the series.

hah Dalkas new friends in the war are just like my friends :P but for me im like Genz,Ashton is like Jacob, Kayla is like Dalka, Sammy is like Lamya, and Louis(shes female :D) is like Ami lol

I like this one i can draw like Dalka does but not as good i just cant get the bodies 0.o but anyways I loved the end :D