I really enjoyed this story. I loved the twist as they leave the cemetery, and Harry is waiting...and the kid is Wes, and not...well, you know, cos you wrote it! Nicely constructed.

This is beautiful. Nice twist halfway through the story, because I had a whole different scenario in my mind at first. I like the idea of Ruth and Harry taking care of Wes. And Zaf and Jo alive and well and together. Lovely :)

Brilliant fic; I thought one thing, then it turned out it was something else... so good :)

oh - twists and turns Lynn, twists and turns.

You had me going a for a bit. And I was about to put my stern face on...

Thanks for sharing it honey.

Beautiful. Really, really beautiful - both heart-warming and heart-wrenching at the same time.

x

Wonderful Lynn, beautifully written as always. I really enjoyed it x

I really like the premise of this and you did it so sweetly. I absolutely love that they see each other's flowers at the grave and yet can't meet.

I never thought Zaf and Jo would leave before Harry! I would love to hear the backstory about how they go...?

Wow! I loved it! hehe A great peice of writing!

Love yaz

Dannii x

I love it hun!

Like I said before, it's perfect...in every sense. Such a sad piece, but so uplifting! Wonderful!