Awesome story! I love the story and I love Dream and the way you fit it in! I can't wait until your next story so PLEASE update!

Constructive critism, eh? I'm sure you know the difference between lose and loose, so make sure you let other people know you know it too. I liked your creation of the ultimate b_:I know a real life girl to go with it. Actually, that word seems to be a compliment to Cho - do you know how nice some dogs are! Do anything for ya! Try and think up some really foul language for next time.

really great. i must say, im not a big fan of harry's (ducks in shame). My fav's are tom riddle, percy, remus, snape, and draco. But this was really well done, u made me enjoy harry for a change! 8-) keep it up!

I LOVE IT! Even though I tend to like Cho, this is very well done. Poor Harry...looking forward to reading more ASAP.

OoOoO!I am sooo looking forward to the sequel. e-mail me when you finally post it! bye!

Classy.

was really good!I'm a sucker for H/H fics so make this one ok?

thank you so much for writing such a decent fic! although im more into r/hr, this was really good! ive seen too many fics where the ppl get together in about 5 seconds and they say "i love you" like they were commenting on the weather. this is a good example of real-life conflict that couples go through, but the next chapter is very predictable. im glad you didnt write a fic where everything was perfect and mushy, and it took a while for the ppl to realize they even _like_ eachother, let alone love eachother. write on!

This was awesome! Please continue!

Do the next one please! i luv this story! H/H forever!