NO SHIT ZACK! WAKEY WAKEY! SMELL THE COFFEE SOLDIER BOY!

Despite all his strengths, Sephy can be a bit dim someimes...

Okay, normally I would have a good comment for this, but the comment I want to say won't go from my brain to my hands. It's something along the lines of Seph's sword. The two of them playing the rabbit game, and Cloud and Leon getting some from each other. I hope you can piece it together cause I sure can't right now...

OUCH! DENIED!

Whoa, Sephy with porn mags... Wow, Cloud you had better do more than just hide in your room. More like hop the bus to the next city and hope he doesn't find you there. Seph IS scary when he's angry, VERY scary...

SOCRE ONE FOR SEPHY! Sorry Leon, but you got PWNED! (Even if you did get to look at Cloud in just a towel...)

Oh, I liked that! Especially the castrate, make a mold, create a dildo and send it back to you part. That put me on the ground for about five minutes and when I first read it, I let out this high pitched shriek that scared the hell out of my dog and made my mom come running thinking there was something wrong with me. Then when she flung the door open and saw me on the floor laughing my ass of, she gave me a WTF look, slammed the door shut then stompped off down the hall. I seriously think I'm going to be in trouble later for doing that, but it will be so worth it. I think if I tell her why I shrieked like that, she might let me off. My mom and I kinda have perverted minds so...yeah...

This is hilarious! xD

This is hilarious. I hope you finish it soon. ;)

LOL XD This one almost made me fall out of my chair XD

Great job. You just made my day _ Thanks so much.

That has to be just about the funniest thing I have EVER read.

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Hilarious!

Man here i am going along enjoying your story laughing and all and then you make me lose the game. *wimpers* i hadent lost all day.

lmfao. this is so cute :) Please continue :)

My favorite was the rice krispies and the breadcrumbs :3 lol. This is just amazing.

I loved this story!