Great story and well written. Too bad it was ended so soon though.

I'm going to be really disappointed when they don't execute him while they can. These kinds of stories always lack the pragmatist.

i REALLY love how you made Sakura so bad ass. I also approve of the fight between orochibitch and Sasuke. Well done.

This is a great start to a new story. All characters seem to be in character. You did good. :)

awesome

Wow, I guess the guy with black katana is like an OC...? I assume Seigi is his sword's counterpart. I wonder which was the Jinchuuriki that assaulted Temari... Wasn't the Gobi Jinchuuriki already captured? And what did that guy mean when he said Hidan and Kakuzu had been dealt with? Are they out of the way now? Ooooh, so many questions!

Yeah, while not entirely thrilling as the first one, this was still pretty exciting. That twist with Naruto's parentage really threw me when Orochimaru revealed it though. Very clever. Like part 1, I liked that you continued with the shifting of the characters perspectives during events. Definitely keeps the reader engaged and puts things into a broader perspective. Like watching watching a movie :]

Well I love this story even if you don't :p

I love how he kinda pulled a supersaiyan 4 there lol that was interesting.

Nice going Author...a short chapter for the end of a great story. Lol nevermind about that, you are a Naruto FF god.

Don't you die, Sasuke-kun, she silently pleaded, having temporarily lost the ability to speak. If you do, I swear I'll kill you.

But he's already dead when you kill him. D8

Sooo...pedophile dead? YEY 3

Great chapter as always.

Short chapter nine though

Nice chapter man keep it up