Well..that was definitely odd. But I like it a lot.

I don't know what I just read, I just know that I love this story, even though it was confusing.

Good Job!

I cried. Honestly no idea why But at the end i turned off my music and wiped my face and my bed finding you made me cry through the whole thing. So there is now a very large wet spot on my bed dedicated to the story.

It is kind of touch and very tragic. the way you set all of the characters as crazy inbreds was very touching and a little creepy.

I really like it and wish you good writing.

May I ask your inspiration for the story?

I don't think I can quite describe what I first thought after reading this fic. It was unbelieveably strange and threw me off in so many different ways, yet oh, it was so good. Every character was so twisted and completely wretched, yet you still kept these little glimpses into their original forms. Really excellent. The story both scared and intrigued me, and, god, I love it.

It would be an understatement to say that that was weird as hell. It was...just weird. But I went back through and read the poem that was dispersed throughout it, and I liked it. I can't say that I understood the story itself, and therefore I don't know if I liked it, but I definitely didn't dislike it. It was just so odd. And sad. Intense would be another word for it. So, what's this about a curse? Will you really tell me the story? I think it was a story of despair. Mixed with insanity and lust. So odd, but definitely worth reading.

Woah. - My first thought. I liked it even though I had to think a little after each break before going on. I love fan fiction that makes me think about it a long time after reading it. xD Nice job.

That was... something. very confusing... felt that the point of view kept changing, but I do like this. I like this kind of view, not perfect, confusing, yes, I really like this.

that was...different? o.O you totally confused me

You've broken my brain.

In a good way, maybe?

-kit

"tell me, do you like my riddles? do you like my new age car? do you want a better life? cuz i can take us pretty far. share a smoke and i'll share my story. i'll tell you, sweet, the only one i know... about a boy who didn't care, if it rained or if it snowed. and, oh my love, it's such a sad one too... it pulls my heartstings and makes me cry, since every single time i tell it, i end up wanting to dies. oh, my love, i tell you so you'll know how i ended up dying. and, oh my sweetness, i am so tired of this goodbye, and yes, i'm lying."

very nice

what..the hell~...that was...intereesting? hahahahha

Oh, geez.

It sorta felt like I was walking around in a maze while reading this, because there were so many twists and turns and bits that were just plain weird, but I liked it. Incredibly original.

Definite fave.

Hey, you're pretty cute.

Someday when the monsters rule the world, maybe we can be included, they always need new flesh and I would surely like to see you among the writhe of bodies.

Wow, that was kinda hard to follow _ ;

I think it wouls make a great story with original characters, though, its great this way too.

But what I think I liked most about it was how terribly bleak and human it was - none of the gushy sappy stuff you usually find on this site.

You got talent kid ;D