| Reviews for Empyreal |
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Nathem chapter 16 . 8/14 Oh my god. Congrats please come backkkk |
OneAppleLeaf chapter 11 . 1/23 Ahhhh yeah this is so exciting! Finally, Danny knows! I hope Jazz will soon know about it too tho, before it's too late. I know you had been leaving clues here and there but honestly, I'm still not sure, haha. My best guess is that Vlad had come from the future, led Danny become a 'stillborn' (idk how he did it but he somehow did), when he's actually just a half ghost (well i also don't know how that happened. No way his parents, however distracted they sometimes was, let a newborn baby near the ghost portal. And it hadn't even build that time yet, right?) And how can Clockwork made him a human body? This is all so weird xD I would even think that ancient ghost is actually tricking Danny and his human body is actually his real body except how did he get ejected from it before? Aghhh I guess I just have to read more. Thanks for sharing us this wonderful story! I think you did fantastic, good job Love, Appleleaf |
Guest chapter 16 . 2/27/2019 This is really good! You should continue some time! |
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 16 . 1/16/2019 That, Sir (or Madam) is a cruel, cruel place to end this. I love the idea and definitely enjoyed reading this. Wish we could have seen what you wanted to do with it. Ah, well. Thank you for the story in any case. Hope all is well in your life. :) |
Devious Purrloin chapter 16 . 1/6/2018 Congratulations on graduating college! |
Devious Purrloin chapter 1 . 6/25/2017 It's a shame you'll never finish this. |
Liza Mondragon chapter 16 . 6/30/2016 Wait a second...so Vlad is actually the Vlad from the other universe we know as the TV show, and after PP, he went to THIS universe, but in this universe, Vlad died! OMIGOSH THIS ALL MAKES SENSE! *mind explodes* |
Liza Mondragon chapter 16 . 6/30/2016 Wait a second...so Vlad is actually the Vlad from the other universe we know as the TV show, and after PP, he went to THIS universe, but in this universe, Vlad died! OMIGOSH THIS ALL MAKES SENSE! *mind explodes* |
Ms.McClue chapter 16 . 11/15/2015 As soon as Danny hit the floor, the sky exploded into various shades of green and black. Trees and animals were sucked into its void. In less than a minute everything was gone, dead in spite of its blooming future. Amongst the swirling sky floated Ghostwriter, closing his unfinished book titled Empyreal. With an apathetic glance he tossed it into the void and left, leaving the world to its demise and the readers disappointed. |
Cindy M 19 chapter 16 . 4/10/2015 The story is very good Did Sam jumped at Vlad? Or Tucker? I like the story |
Nikki Pond chapter 16 . 10/17/2014 Update |
FayeTheBitch chapter 16 . 9/8/2014 What?! NO! That can't be all! Please update! |
Anjali chapter 16 . 3/13/2014 Great reveal! I love your concept! I got the alternate timeline thing towards the beginning, and that Vlad was somehow behind it, but I wasn't sure how; and the how of it turned out to be pretty big! Vlad with powers comparable to those of Clockwork, making Clockwork fallible... and I absolutely love the way you explained your Phantom multiverse! Please continue this amazing story! ::D |
Anjali chapter 7 . 3/13/2014 Normally I don't review until I get to the last or most recent update, but with this, I can't help myself. "What this a mark of execution?" XXD I love this! And I love how well you write the perspective of someone who has never been exposed to American culture, who at the same time has never experienced physical reactions to intense emotions, or being sick, or other things that humans in general take for granted! |
WwInactiveAccountwW chapter 16 . 2/15/2014 is this really the ending? I hate reading amazing phics that updated three or more years ago and were never finished because theres so much cliffhanger and no hope of ever being satisfied. This is totally worth staying up til midnight |