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Wow. Very impressive story, my friend - and I must congratulate you for being the only good writer to tell the story of the male Jaden. All others are emo remarks of how a female apprentice comes to love her master.

Good work. It's a shame you've interrupted continuity - but should you come back, know that I'll be the first one to come here and review.

The best wishes;
Foacir.

2 Years Later, the wielder of the Scepter discovered The Force Powers of the scepter.

He Trained every Hard Force Power And he also Discovered That The User also Can Use Sith magic.

The Spells are easier with the Scepter, and it will be easy to Focus on every spell or Force powers.

You should Really Write More Chapters for The Scepter of Ragnos.

Impressive. I like the direction you've taken the Kyle/Dark Jaden story. You've shown how even though Jaden uses the Dark Side of the Force, he is not controlled by it. And as Luke said of Vader, "there is still good in him", otherwise I don't think he'd be able to hear Kyle's voice.

You also did a nice job on the scene in the Council Chamber. It reminded me of scenes written in published works. I'm a little surprised to have Admiral Ackbar as advocating war, but then again, perhaps to him it is better to attack this new threat than wait.

I also found interesting have you gave both Jaden and Mara apprentices. It makes sense, but definitely wasn't what I expecting.

I also enjoyed how Kyle so easily dealt with Alora. It's almost like, why did she bother trying to attack him? But that rancor battle, that was scary.

Hope you've got more coming. I shall look forward to it

Nice... You should consider having Jaden or Alora mention to the jedi that the force is not black and white but sometimes shades of grey must exist or have Jaden be pulled to a planet strong in the universal force.

hey great chapter i love this story i play the game of it with jaden in their and it never show what happen after he got the scepter and everything but this story does show at least i read it and as long you keep doing this story i review all the time here if you keep coming with the storie i love to see how this end as well and jaden can he learn that the scepter of ragnos can turn into a sword it self from the bottom of the scepter i hope jaden learn all it powers of the dark side of the scepter

hey great story i love this i hope jaden and kyle will meet each other again please update soon

Sweetness! Update when you have the chance, okay? I'm just going to ask, was the name Alora Dark referencing to that Twilek apprentice of Tavion's?

Awesome fic! I can picture it all. Update soon.

I'm surprised this hasn't recieved a review yet. Great, intriguing start with Jaden being on his own side.

Criticisms are that in one section near the beginning, Jaden wasn't capitalised and I find the name, Alora to be similiar to another Dark Jedi from Jedi Academy.

Other than that great and I'm looking forward to more.