Fun story! And great job writing the different voices for the different Doctors!

I love multi-Doctor stories like this, and especially when the Companions are able to interact with each other positively and without hating on each other anymore than their character allows them to. I know just how old this story is, but this is more to let you know that people still read and enjoy this.

By the way, Jack blowing a kiss to the Brigadier made me bust out laughing. xD

Great story, very well written

Well, you certainly must have planned this out before you wrote it to figure out where all the characters had to be! Good job. Great characterization and spelling/grammar and a smooth twining of three different Doctors together for one event. If you still have the file on the computer, though, I would suggest uploading it again and sticking in divisions when you switch from one companion to the next, since that got a little confusing. That's the only suggestion I can think of, though. Excellent work.

_ good job!

Ah, shades of past. The Five Doctors. That was a good episode. Your story was solid and well done. Very plausible.

Great job!

Oh my word. That was brilliant.

I honestly can't think of any crits. At all. Which is insane. You handled the predistination-y parodox-y timy-wimy-ness of it very adeptly, with no glaring flaws of logic. Three isn't my favourite Doctor, but you handled him well. All the companions too; I loved Benton and the Brig, and the girls-oh, the smug look from Three when Martha was doing her doctor thing cracked me up. I could just hear him thinking, "I sure can pick 'em." XD And I liked Martha's reaction to meeting the infamous Rose Tyler, and Ten admitting that that they're all special. Really brings to mind how much Rose/Martha are like Jo/Sarah Jane. Sarah and Martha are undoubtably smarter and more self-sufficient, but Jo and Rose are so girlishly, innocently loyal that you can't help but like them.

Good job, again. There should be more fic like this. 8)

Haha, cool!

Quite nice. Very good set up so the Doctors don't meet, but the other three do, and nice characterization of Jack.