Reviews for Alchemy's Child
Penguin6663 chapter 5 . 9/28/2019
I feel so sad now
Guest chapter 5 . 8/9/2019
Shame this hasn't been updated in so long :(
Guest chapter 4 . 8/9/2019
Oh good he just left 'em behind lol
Guest chapter 3 . 8/9/2019
Wait
Did Rose die? Please tell me Rose didn't die
DThunder11 chapter 5 . 7/9/2019
The ending was beautiful!
Raeolu chapter 5 . 3/20/2019
Dang, this was super well done. I love the way you write the characters and their interactions! The interlude with Roy was touching, and really makes me feel both like Ed was mourned deeply, but also that, well, four years have passed. Time keeps marching on for everyone.

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this and share it with us!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2018
This is intriguing.
It would be an interesting story even without the crossover but this way it's probably going to be even more unique.
I can only see 5 chapters so I suspect discontinuation... But I'm gonna read on anyway.

About your dilemma from the AN at the end of the first chapter: yes, I definitely agree that Al calling Ed "brother" all the time doesn't quite work (it'd be even more cringy and odd in my native language Polish), yet a sudden Japanese word in a text in English may sound strange too... a little amateurish, I guess.
People on the West usually just don't give titles to their older siblings like they would to parents, grandparents and other elders. So I think it should just be translated to "Ed" because it sounds just as natural in English as 兄さん in Japanese.
MonochromicAngel chapter 5 . 11/6/2018
This is great, and I hope you update soon!
FlyAway98 chapter 5 . 2/9/2018
This... is the first story I loved on Harry Potter fandom. As the books have a very important meaning for me, I don't like to read stories about them. But on the Fullmetal Alchemist Fandom, I'm a newbie... and when I discovered your fanfiction, I just had to go for it. Because with it there was the possibility of Ed keeping his alchemy, getting a new talent in the same time, and although he's been send in another world, Al is still with him (and who would be able to resist to a 4 years old Al ?). Add to this that he become DADA professor in Hogwart and that he's like a genius even if he didn't know anything about magic before going through the Gate (pretty sure Izumi Curtis would laugh herself to death if she actually knew that Edward's now a teacher, she would be like now, you'll understand my suffering) and you've made a story that I can't just wait to see the next update. Also, I loved your idea of an Achemy for the people day, as a memorial to the Elric brothers... Mustang being the one behind it just make me more happy ! So yeah, you've done quite a job here, thank you so much for it and please don't let it stop here, I want to know what happen next (and I need more brotherly love...). 'til your next chapter, and thank you again for this story ! (any mistakes are due to my lack of attention during my English classes, as it's not my native language, sorry about them)
Nightwing15 chapter 2 . 9/28/2017
So, Alphonse is basically his, assuming Edward is seventeen and not twenty, normal 16 year old self in a four year old's body? Oh, and loving this story so far!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2017
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2017
5 chapters.

And why the hell isn't this in the FMA crossover category?
snek chapter 5 . 8/4/2017
this is an amazing and original fanfiction, please continue it, I've read this too many times to count and I haven't gotten bored yet!
kasia224 chapter 1 . 7/14/2017
Heeey I read your profile we live by each other ish! (I'm an edmontonian) Great story! I never read x-overs but this was cleverly done~
Jirachi At Sundown chapter 1 . 7/7/2017
Question: if this is a crossover, why isn't it under the crossover category?
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