sorry to say this but that was CRAP sorry again

Hex

it's ok. im not jumping for joy, but its okay

Awesome story! I really like it

Um, did I miss something? Destiny Unleashed Part Two was never released, right? So, where did all that info on it come from? Shouldn't you have chapter for it? And also, I think that you're mixing up Git and Rommy - Git never speaks.

But, it was good anyway. I have a feeling that you'll do the show justice, but please try to make longer chapters.