Such a plot twist.

I'm not happy I am filled with feelings

Okay so the death thing in the earlier chapters definetly made me sad and I was upset but he end of chap 6. But I do think chapter 7 had a nice ending even if I would have ratherd the theory that the veil doesn't actually kill people and for Sirius to come back so they could raise them or something...

Still good story anyway!

aww. So cute. I cryed so hard in this. But still great writing

Aww, i totally loved the story! It was so sad an beautiful at the same time!

Why did I read this? It was very well written and beautiful in a way. But I cried the last 3 or 4 chapters. Damn waterworks.

That was so sad that I'm actually crying. Great story.

Aww, that was so sad but it was really good! I loved it.

I think it's great, actually - well done

You did very well. I like it, I really do

so you decided to follow the books a bit huh?

If you need help just let me know

Lauren

I was kinda sad when you chucked out Finding the Line. It rules, actually. But anyway, I like this epilogue too. Good luck with everything, and God bless always. MC2456

in all the previous sirius x remus i have read its always sirius the one whos pregnant but i really liked the fact that in this one remus got preggers. too bad one of his kids died, and he got separated from the other four; nonetheless, can you still make a sequel in which he gets his babies back?

When I read your story I was appalled to find that my beloved Harry Potter characters were defiled by a story line that did not make any coherent sense but also raped my eyes with the entire birth scene(I will never think of Remus the same way, AGAIN). Summed up this was the largest pile of poo I have ever had the misfortune of setting my eyes upon. Some advice: Writing mpreg story's are best left to miracle medical doctors, not crap plot for a crap story. Or at least learn to write.

Excuse me, I must now bath my eyeballs in chlorine.

Your beloved FLMRTRLL!

*Don't hate me because its true*

Sequel please! i can't wait!

ohh, the birth scene made me cry... and when hermione finds Remus... that was great. I wish it could have been AU though, I hate it when Siri dies... every time I reread book 5 I cry for hours after that scene.