| Reviews for Slytherin's Warning |
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seeminglymeaningless chapter 18 . 4/11 You're probably no longer reading reviews from a story you posted 13 years ago, but if you are, please note that I thoroughly enjoyed your representation of Draco and he felt true to canon. Really liked Remus as a mentor too. Stayed up to 1am to finish this in one sitting, it was worth every minute. Thank you for sharing. |
Vernix chapter 18 . 12/11/2018 You made me smile when reading this chapter. I do not mean anything bad It's just... I'm from Poland and for me Uczelnia od Napoje does sounds kinda weird. It's like University from Drinkables. It should be something like Uczelnia Napojów or Uczelnia Wywarów. It's more right. |
Lamatadora chapter 18 . 10/8/2015 great story, but i'd prefered if the end had been develop |
SpiderCarvings chapter 18 . 3/15/2015 This was a wonderful story. Thank you for writing it! Very poignant and yet full of hope. |
Lupinesence chapter 18 . 7/24/2013 Awesome fic :) |
Magical muffin chapter 18 . 4/22/2012 I know that you've finished this years ago but I found this only recently. It was so amazing that I simply couldn't add it to my favorites without commenting! C: I loved the beginnings of the chapters and the way you so successfully blended your great story to the Potter world. Thank you for writing this! 3 |
Yolen Yui chapter 18 . 6/13/2010 The ending was rushed. But it would've been anyways in real life. I mean it would've been just as Schzwoom. Or something... I really don't care for that veela ending of yours 'x' |
YaoiGirl1997 chapter 18 . 3/29/2010 I loved your story I wish u would write a sequel but I get why u don't. |
Neighpony chapter 1 . 5/21/2009 Really well written story, you got the attitude of cannon Draco very nicely I think. |
The Darkest wizard chapter 18 . 5/6/2009 This is a FANTASTIC story! |
put here 2 feel joy chapter 18 . 7/7/2008 I've been reading this fic from start to finish over the last couple of days and enjoyed it immensely. I know you finished this a year ago but it's still worth reviewing. It was a great read, and I did have fun reading Deathly Hollows. I still can't believe it's all over... Thanks for writing this! |
TenshiNanashi chapter 18 . 12/15/2007 I enjoyed this story. The reading of it actually has kept me up well past when I should be sleeping. I did enjoy the interactions between Draco and Remus, and how Draco kind of loses himself and has to continue making choices anyways. It was a tragic tale (Ron and Hermione dead, Remus in a coma) but overall pretty good. |
tambrathegreat chapter 18 . 9/16/2007 I just discovered your story. I enjoyed it immensely. I will definately be reading more of your HP stories. (Sorry, not a fan of Stargate anymore.) You have a great talent for conveying emotional situations without becoming melodramatic. I liked the way the story ended on an upbeat note. I would like to find out what happened to Snape in your universe, but I suppose you won't be writing that one. Thanks for the great story. |
VKT chapter 18 . 8/3/2007 I didn't get to read this until now because I was away xDD Wow! Loved it once again. Great ending, very ambiguous :) Of course, I think Lupin survived xD |
Pale-December chapter 18 . 7/27/2007 I've read your final chapter twice now... Once before and once after I picked up the seventh book. Like I feared, a part of me DOES like your version of things a bit better, but I was surprised to see just how similarly you and Rowling dealt with redemption. Draco's response to Tonks is just too perfect, much better than the sobbing heart-felt apology a lot of author's tend to favor. You're very good with his personality and behavior. Guess who's now on my Author Alert list? |