Nightmare:...
(Shiki looks at Nightmare)
Shiki: yep she's stunned speechless, the story must have been that good. My complements to the writer. Well done

Hello! Its very rare I find an AU fic that I enjoy, but this is one of my favorites. :)

This is probably one of my favorite fics EVER.
I found this story 4 years ago and I have read it probably 4 times. You kept Vincent in character and have also ruined any other Vincent pairing for me. Im not the best at writing reviews so all i'll say is that this story is THE BEST. Vincent isnt a very common guy to write with OCs... so thank you!

Amaya is probably one of the most annoying girl I have ever read. She does NOT deserve Vincent. First she stays with that Trace guy because she's desperate and pathetic then she dates that other guy to make Vincent jealous. What a selfish bitch! She's really no better than Lucrecia.

So this story is awesome! I love every sentance you have written and even though I am not too fond of first person writing damn you have me hooked! I love how well written it is and how beleivable it is! Now if you will excuse me I have to read some more! -

YOU KEPT VINCENT IN CHARACTER!
I don't know if you are still reading your reviews since this story was published FOREVERZ ago - you should know that this was the best OC fanfic I've ever read.
... and once again it's mainly because you kept the main character in CHARACTER :)
Your writing skills are outstanding & the chapters are not too long / too short - thank you for publishing such great work!

Erosiva

I just finished reading this and I cried and laughed the same time. You are an amazing reader. Thank you!

I love this story its so romantic!
Kyaaaa!

I love this story. It was well written

I EFFING LOVE YOU. For writing this. :) 3 You have my respect, and gratitude.

So cute!

Loved it. :'(

OMG. That was the best vincent/OC story ever. I just read the whole thing start to finish and it is now a quarter to four in the morning XD That was...awesome. You completely kept Vincent in character, and an excellent job with making the whole thing progress very slowly and believable, I was hooked! :D Youre an awesome writer, keep up the good work!

wow i really love your story.

Okay... It took me three days to read this, (I wanted to read it continuously but when the screen starts to blur that tends to be the time you need to go to sleep, ANYWAY...) I LOVED EVERY CHAPTER! I should have reviewed more often but I'd finish a chapter, and it was like "OH MY GOD! WHAT GREATNESS! MUST READ NEXT CHAPTER!" (Roomy: Yeah that's what you were pretty much like all weekend...)

(Shut up voices before I poke you with a Q-tip) I've just got to tell you that you did a great job on this story. And I'm adding this, if I haven't already, to my Favorites stories. I haven't checked yet but I'm hoping you added a squeal, or something... Any way I love this work. You have my greatest admiration.

P.S. I notice you had your character wearing a lot of pink... Not my favorite color, but Asian women look good in pink so never mind. I just wanted to point out that I noticed the little things in your story, including the impossible-to-get-all-of-them spelling/grammatical errors. I have the same problems, and my editor are always on my ass about it... So maybe I shouldn't have brought that up...

You still have a VERY large amount of my greatest admiration, so I'm going to shut up not and read another of your works...