Reviews for Fragmented Time |
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M. Carwright chapter 10 . 3/20/2018 Yes, I know I'm reading through all of your Magic Kaito fiction in one go, but I can't help myself! Your writing is so infinitely readable. This last was my favorite of this collection. Once again, thank you for writing these! |
zairoon chapter 10 . 9/22/2017 Aaaaaaaah ! *o* Omg I loved all these drabbles (although you killed Shinichi twice ! naughty !) I just love Kaito and Shinich together (friends, rivals, or lovers) they're just so good together lol Thank you for all these short stories it was awesome ! I want more ! :D Zai. |
3DPhantom chapter 10 . 12/31/2016 I don't really ship, but I'm loving these. Wish you would write more! Very interesting ideas you've got here, and they're well-written as well. |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 10 . 6/13/2016 That was adorable! Well done! :3 |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 8 . 6/13/2016 Yet another moving drabble. It was great, I loved how you portrayed their feelings and everything. Well done! :3 |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 1 . 10/11/2015 That was really cute. I wonder how their second meeting would be and what was written on the note KID left behind. :3 |
Jennosaur chapter 10 . 2/17/2015 Aww, that last one was pretty adorable. You should continue adding to this. It's really good :) |
Jennosaur chapter 7 . 2/17/2015 Ah, another amazing drabble! The one's on Shinichi's death were especially great. :) |
Jennosaur chapter 1 . 2/17/2015 Holy god. This gave me tingles! Ahh, I'm already in love with your writing :') Tbh, if it's a multi-chaptered story, I just do one review for the entire fic, but this chapter is AMAZING. Anyways, I'm gonna continue reading now so... See you in my next review? |
RoraNeko chapter 9 . 11/29/2014 Cute |
RoraNeko chapter 8 . 11/29/2014 Terribly intimate. I like that |
Nathalaia chapter 10 . 7/23/2012 Some cute, funny and sad drabbles. I enjoyed reading all of them :D I can't help but point out, though, that you should never use three exclamation marks as you did in 'Hello and Goodbye' when Kaito said '"Tantei-kun!"'. One is enough, and if you really want to get something through, then make it cursive and maybe even fat. I am aware that this is an older story, so you might not do that now. Also, I think it was only in that chapter I saw it. Either way, very enjoyable! You are very good at capturing their character, too. Also, you are an excellent writer :) Nathalaia |
Plunny.Empress chapter 10 . 7/28/2011 How sweet. Can't wait for more. - |
Hikari-Pandora chapter 10 . 5/22/2011 oh you can, you just had to try it once. nice fluffiness! |
Hikari-Pandora chapter 9 . 5/22/2011 If only people could see through each other's walls like that... it rarely happens in reality, but it's still good that it does! Here I go again, bobbling around. it might be that i'm just in the mood tonight. |