| Reviews for Primitive Desires |
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BookwormKW chapter 1 . 2/11 could you provide another link for the full version please? |
DreamedSilverWings chapter 1 . 12/28/2019 Sensual. I love the way you describe that primitive and dark part of Ichigo |
RoseWithoutThorns1507 chapter 1 . 1/3/2016 geezzz, took a lot of work and time but I found the full smut version here: . |
creepysaru chapter 1 . 5/4/2015 Fanlib is closed D: could you please upload it in another page pretty please! By the way I loved how you wrote the relationship it was awesome 3 |
Audrey Kurosaki chapter 1 . 6/8/2013 you're really good at things like these ! as usual, i always read the smut version on your journal :) very well written ! love it ! |
The-Scarlett-Kat chapter 1 . 3/14/2013 Hey, I found where the full version is to everyone out there! Go here: tag/smut |
Phantom of the Night 117 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012 This was really well writen, but it sucks that fanlib is shut down. Now others can't read the full story... :( |
nik chapter 1 . 8/23/2012 i looked it up but find it |
intercostalspace chapter 1 . 7/27/2012 too bad i can't reach the fanlib fic anymore. |
D chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 can ypu please provide a new link for this story?the link does not work. The story wherein ypou give life to a hollow is what of the bestIO've read so far. Kudos! |
jorie chapter 1 . 10/30/2011 erm.. the link to the full story doesn't work... |
Dark-heika chapter 1 . 6/13/2011 wow. I hav read a lot of ichiruki, and i havta say, the best comes in when the hollow's gotta part in it. anyways, no one really mentions the hollow's taste for shinigami, so its an unusual (although ingenious. people should work with it more often) plot element. either way, the link uv got on it is broken. i cant read the best parts of it. watevr it is, trust me when i say that iv seen a LOT worse, and that whoevr said that it wasnt allowed doesnt know what they're talking about. i gotta say, i fav a lot of stories, but this is one of the ones that really deserves it. still, following the link thing, i think ya should just put the part ya cut out back in. itd stop annoying me, and i would actually be able to read it since the site ya posted it on is broke. so, thats the only downside. my last comment: YOU are the author, not the reviewers. this is not a pro story, the reviewers are not publishers/editors, u dont havta do wat they say. if they dont like, then they can go read something else. especially on something like this. its YOUR story, they hav no say. if u wanna post something, then, for god's sake, POST IT! still, u dont havta put the part ya cut out back in, just FIX THE LINK SO THAT SOMEONE CAN ACTUALLY READ IT! |
EvanSol0919 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011 This is really good but can you post a new link! |
AJLYAMBER96 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 www. fanlib fanfic/ PrimitiveDesires/ 2efh2q is the link u posted in the story. i looked it up, took out the spaces even... but i didnt come up with anything. i looked up to see what i could get... but i got the same results. is that the right link? do u think u can give me a better link? |
Crystal-Bulma chapter 1 . 10/26/2010 I read the edited version now and it ia already better that the one with GrimmRukia. I can't get the link to work sadly. Can I ask that you either mail me the link or perhaps the chapter, PLEASE! I'll be your best friend for life! ;oD |