Reviews for Season Six
Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 16 . 11/24/2017
This was amazing. It's been so long since I've read any good Teen Titans or RobStar fics, but this is just amazing. This level of writing, plot and character development, and emotion are what I've been searching for for so long and I need more. Keep up the good work, because this was great. Your creativity in using Dick's backstory and molding it into an incredible new story I said something I had never thought of or seen before. It was amazing.
Don't stop writing! You've clearly got a talent for it!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2017
Seasons 6 was meant to be starfire's season. But they never made season 6. Season 1 was for robin.
Guest chapter 16 . 7/19/2016
Out of all the fan fictions I read this was entirely my favorite to read, when I finished I was sad it was over but that was a great ending!
Jupiter Queen chapter 16 . 6/17/2016
This story was excellent from start to finish. I adored your writing style, your characterizations of the Titans (which were so true to how they are in the show), the build-up to Raven and Beast Boy, the pace of all the chapters, and the utter suspense of it all. I have no major qualms about it, save for some scare grammatical errors (which never detracted from the depth of the plot at hand).

This was a wonderfully (and surprisingly) dark take on a potential season six and I loved it.
Someone chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
Finally! Someone who gets me. I mean it's too GREAT to be true. Look:

Avengers,clintasha
Avatar the last airbender
Teentitans,raven x bb, star x Rob
Bones !
All together!
Guest chapter 16 . 10/19/2015
Season 7 plzzzzz
tineabean11 chapter 16 . 1/22/2015
This is THE best Teen Titans Fanfiction I have ever read. Thank you for writing it.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2014
Pure shit.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/29/2014
... No words... can describe... my feelings right now... I feel like a freaking kaleidoscope of emotions! Oh my god the feels! The overwhelming and utterly confusing feels! The beauty of this story! I am SO recommending this story to ALL of my friends! You're pure talent amazes me! It was well worth any wait!
The Shade Has Been Thrown chapter 16 . 5/18/2014
I loved this story to pieces! No pressure, but I believe that a Season Seven would the icing on the cake;)
Aurelianella chapter 3 . 1/10/2014
I love the way you write Raven with a real personality.
Aurelianella chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
A very good opening. I like how well you balance them while still focusing on Robin.
Guest chapter 16 . 11/30/2013
That was so intense. AMAZING
aceofqueens chapter 16 . 8/1/2013
So, it was a great story. I have good things to say about it, and a few complaints. I'll start with the complaints.

1. How exactly were these thugs able to capture the titans? It seems unrealistic to me. They would need to be some super stealthy ninjas or something, and from the final battle we can see that they are clearly not, and are just a bunch of thugs. And there is also the part where Raven gets captured because she just starts meditating out in the middle of the open. There is no way she would do that. She isn't it an idiot. That felt unrealistic to me. And what about robin? Isn't he the stealth expert? His senses are so good he can fight in total darkness. So how did some thug sneak up on him so easily, twice?

2. I don't get how the drug that blocked the Titan's powers could possibly work. First of all, in order to develop a drug like that, wouldn't you need to physically study them and their powers? Which is something the "dealers in Gotham" never had the chance to do. Secondly, how can a single drug work on three superheroes with different powers? Raven, Beast Boy, and Starfire all have vastly different superpowers. Wouldn't you need a drug tailor made for each of them, which goes back to my first point?

3. The climactic sequence with the battle between Robin vs. Zucco and the others vs. the thugs was dragged out way too long. It was suspenseful at first, true. But after a while, it became annoying, predictable, and boring. There is such a thing as too much suspense. The novelty of it can wear of just like anything else. The result was that, for me, I lost interest and immersion in the story. A good climax should be faster paced than the rest of the story, not even slower.

Alright, now for the good:

1. This story really creeped me out right up until the ending. The ambiguity of what happened during those two weeks is one of the creepiest things I have ever read. Ambiguity, the not knowing, is scarier than any monster. The human mind is unique in the way that it can actually imagine something to "fill in the blanks", and it will always be something 10 times worse than anything could actually have happened, Good horror writers exploit this fact all of the time, and whether or not you intended to, you did as well. I read lots of horror stores, play horror video games, and all that stuff. And this story got to me more than most other things I've experienced. Well done.

2. I'm glad you fit a BB/Rae sub-plot in there. It freshened up the story a bit and made it less monotonous. It could have gotten old quickly otherwise.

3. Your writing style and diction is more advanced than that of other writers. It felt clean and easy to read, for which I am grateful. I also noticed few spelling and grammar errors, and they aren't a big deal.

4. Other than that brief thing I mentioned with Raven, I think you portrayed the characters realistically. That you made them respond to the events in the story in a way that felt real. You were true to the characters. For example, you didn't overdo Beast Boys silliness or Raven's cynicism.

5. The pacing, right up to the end, was good. I mean, other than that chapter with Cyborg in the eating contest. Other than that, I felt it moved pretty evenly. I kept wanting to know what happened next, and you would reveal just enough to be reasonable while still making me want to keep reading to find out the whole truth. I really couldn't predict what would happen next. I guess it kept me on the edge of my seat.

I think the good outweighs and overpowers the bad. I'm gonna favorite this story because it was excellent. I'd give it a 4/5 for being almost perfect.

As for season 7, I'd read it if you wrote it. In fact, I'd be excited to. But don't write it just because people pressure you. Write it if you actually want to, otherwise it won't come out as good.

Happy writing.
aceofqueens chapter 10 . 7/31/2013
I know Robin has no "traditional" super powers. But is it really fair to say that he is powerless?

-Super intellect (designing the Red-X suit very quickly; formulating stategies)
-Super reflexes/agility/acrobatics
-Super charisma/leadership
-Super willpower/determination/courage
-Super strength? he did pick up Cinder Block in "Apprentice"

Awesome story though. Up to now, I didn't feel the need to comment because I couldn't find a single thing wrong. I will review it when I finish (on chapt. 10)
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