It's Teme not Temee

The curse of super good fanfictions ever finishing is haunting me. Anyways, other than ch 1 which used just gave too much of a description of canon scenes and lacked adding something new, other than the ranma inner dialogue, this fic is great. We see changes, like consequences for learning new techniques, and changes in naruto himself. I disagree. Naruto is a genius in his own right. He did learn many advance techniques almost all on his own and adapted techniques from observation (uzumaki barrage) but that is nothing compared to ranma. Im suprised people don't expect him to have a secret sharingan or something. Anyways, im sad we didn't get to see a part where ranma bonds with naruto. I would like to think tanma would take him in as a brother due to his immense isolation.

Greetings! Here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still writing! I am glad I took the time to read this fic, and pleased to note that I liked the plot, the premise, and the story line! I am hoping that this fic isn't dead, simply on hiatus until such time as your muse decides to finally release the next chapters from her hands into yours! I am looking forward to seeing how Ranma will help Naruto improve his strength in a week, as well as how Naruto will change as he and Ranma merge into one full being, with Ranma's more experienced memories helping to further influence Naruto! I am also looking forward to seeing the other changes that you will bring about concerning the other characters in this universe! Just as I say from time to time to other authors, I say now, please remember that your writing is yours, and if others don't like it, then why did they take the time to read more than one or two chapters, before deciding to let the story alone? LOL, if they took the time to read to the current chapter, before blasting, then they are obviously just being jealous of the fact you could do something that they can't! I don't know if that is a issue for you, being flamed by anyone, but if they took the time to flame, then it's just jealousy if there is not constructive criticism! Again, here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still writing, and that real life isn't kicking you around!

'Sigh' Yet another awesome fic that will never get updated or finished.

What the Hyuuga are trying is just unbelievable, if it was anyone but Naruto it could be believed, but killing Naruto equal to eventually setting the Kyubi free, so at most they could demand non intrusive searches of his body.

A shame this hasn't been updated in such a while...

Personally I think it is entirely possible for Ranma to have learned several pressure points thanks to exposure to Dr. Tofu, Cologne, and Happosai(especially so after the Ultimate Weakness technique Happosai used on him). I could also see him using said techniques against someone who he would normally not(or could not, as his honor demands) fight using his standard techniques.

There is also a lot Ranma could do in an additional two years time after beating Saffron and Herb, most of all training, altering, and creating new techniques to use. That and master any martial art techniques he has come across during his time in Nerima(the Iron Cloth/Ribbon technique comes to mind).

After all, Ranma is exceptionally talented at mastering new techniques. He also has reached a plateau point in Canon after defeating both Herb and Saffron, especially Saffron. So rather than laze about like his father, I have little doubt Ranma would have worked on reverse-engineering the various techniques he came across and come up with some of his own(or at least a variant of said technique).

I do find the pairing of Ranma and Naruto(pairing not shipping, you sickos) into one body an excellent idea. After all, I believe myself the reason for most of Naruto's idiocy(outside of the author's intentions) is most likely caused by a lack of a proper education(which is as much the academy teachers' fault as Naruto's own, which actually parallels Ranma's academic troubles).

I come to this conclusion for Naruto via pointing out the same thing you did: Naruto's mastery of the Shadow Clone technique within a single night. That no one bothered to tell him about the memory transfer ability of the clones, especially since Kakashi could have used them to train each of his Genin individually by providing his technically undivided attention before having them use what they just learned in a team training exercise. There are a ridiculous number of ways to utilize the clone technique without needing the absolutely ridiculous level Naruto could generate.

Very readable story - good use of language, humour and characterisation. Significant issues at the plotting end, though.
1) You're recapitulating canon far too closely - the changes you *have* made feel superficial. The only real twist is the Hyuuga wanting to dissect Naruto, and that hasn't paid off yet.
2) In the pursuit of #1, you're overlooking changes that really should have happened. As one example among many: Naruto didn't even leave a clone to help Shino against Kankuro? Really?
3) Ebisu's epiphany about how awesome Naruto is felt kinda Mary-Sueish.

I know it's been a decade since the last update, but what has been written is really good. Would look forward to seeing more it in the future, if possible!

Y u no update :(

stranded fish dont drown. they suffocate because their respiration organs dont work with air.

i love the way the chacter for ranma/naruto is set up. is it ranmas soul, mind or both and how did they get there, is this fic dead? i would love to see more.

would you consider update this fic? you have 9 years without update this story!
and let me tell you, this fic is AWESOME!

I think when Naruto gets hurt in the fight with kubuto and ochimaru jirjaiya will see the extra seal ochimaru put on the kyuubi seal and take it off
Please update soon

Tbh this story is surprisngly good, it's gone from being decent to actually good. I wonder if Ranma ever takes control of Naruto while Naruto is knocked out at some point.