WHY DID YOU BETRAY THEM TERRA! You could've given Slade the middle finger and said "Thanks for helping me with my powers, now go f*** yourself b****"

This was such a sweet story. It's clear that Terra really likes being with these people. The ending, with it's reminder of the awful things to come, makes this piece a bittersweet read. Poor Terra. She deserved a happier fate the one of being Slade's repentant, sorrowful apprentice.

A very nice story showing the perfect conflict that Terra must have had going through her mind as she went back to the Titans after her training with Slade.

Oh what a bittersweet story. I like how she takes comfort in her new family in spite of herself...and the foreshadowing.

That's some nice work there. I was surprised to see only two reviews, but I suppose you only posted it not too long back.

I didn't read too many Terra stories recently, but it's nice to see one which is done well. It's not a common angle to take (that I've seen), just to see an appreciation of the calm side.

The characters were all nicely portrayed. I would have thought it might be tough to do Terra (since we don't see her so often), but you have written her to a level I would consider to be proper. Done her justice if you will.

The part where BB was telling his jokes made me smile. I suppose that's really how it would be, even though we don't see it.

Nice chapter here. Gave me an entertaining read.

As regards whether you should go on with it... I think it's great as it is. Leave it there.

that was really good. it was diffrent. i'm kind of sick of reading stuff about bb trying to get terra to remember, or raven and terra fighting over bb. this was original. good job.

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! Truly wonderful! Honestly, Terra gets so much bad hype (even though there's a good reason) that I can hardly find any good stories about her. But this was adorable. Every character was right on target-especially the two centerpieces. Very enjoyable read. Can I add it to my C2?