This whole thing was perfect. I read so much Wincest that characterize Sam and Dean as pansexual sex gods who blow each others' minds the first time no matter how kinky they get. So it was refreshingly hilarious to read a take where even a blow job went monstrously wrong. And I will never tire of how you write John's reaction. I read that whole final scenario cringing, knowing they would get caught but unable to look away from the train wreck. Great job!

Funny and sexy! Love it.

Oh my f*uck! Seriously! This story was sooo much fun to read! And pretty hot at the end ;) and hilarious at the end with the 'surprise' ! omg I loved this story!

In general really hot XD!

I'm laughing My Freaking head off!

This was super hot! Totally worth a read. :D

First off, the first two screw ups were fucking hilarious! The barf and the punch were cracking me up! Then when Sam literally fucked Dean's face... just nghhghhh. And then a kick to the nose! They are some rough sexers (which I LUUUURVE). Also, the mention of Sam's retarded bedroom eyes where he's batting them "furiously", was SO hilarious. And then of course, I loved all the hot sex. Great job!

I couldn't laugh hard enough

That was excellent and exactly what I think would actually happen if they tried. I'm still chuckling about the surprise. Well cheers loves that was great. Sequal perhaps?

wow

An interesting and funny story and very well written.

The poor boys... I laughed with tears in my eyes.

This is so well written and had some really hilarious moments. Great job. The puking on the dick...inspired LOL this is a lot more real to me than two straight men being able to fall into a gay sex relationship really easily.

OMG the last line was brilliant! Great fic!

This is probably the most clever PWP I have ever read. My favorite was Dean getting kicked in the face (that was priceless).

I felt so sad when Dean realized that he made Sam bleed (he looked so hurt), but the best part was the end. Surprise, indeed.

OHMYGOD this was GENIUS! I have had this saved to read for like a month and everytime I'd start something would happen and I'd have to stop (so I kinda felt for the boys, lol!) but OMGOMGOMG this was so funny and hot and AWESOME! XD

And the end? Just "Surprise." was so perfect. I mean, yeah John would really freak out and blah blah blah but it fit the voice and tone and everything of this story SO WELL...

(and now everytime any of my friends say "What the fuck? You..." I answer with "What the fuck? You came in my eye!" XD

so yeah...epic awesome, yo. epic awesome :D

one thing, though: you should probably put in some kind of page break between each of the times (I think has something you can use when you edit the text, and if not just use : or something...I'm sure you read enough that you've seen what I mean :) but I know is a dick about certain symbols, so grr). I only bothered mentioning coz I got a little lost a couple times and had to figure out that a new time was starting.

but OTHER THAN THAT this was great and I'm SO happy I read it :D :D :D

Bahahahahahhahahahhahaha. Okay, so I was totally not expecting that at all! Poor John! _ At least the boys FINALLY got it right.

Loved it!