| Reviews for Breathe |
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   Mama May-Eye chapter 1 . 11/16/2018 Aw! Loved it! I love the switches between Leo the Brother and Leo the Leader, but you can feel his concern in both roles. |
| SleepingSeeker chapter 1 . 11/11/2015 Nice one shot! |
| flikaroo chapter 1 . 2/1/2015 Yep, you had me going for a while that Leo was a goner, but I am so glad he wasn't. Clever little oneshot! |
| Kinya1987 chapter 1 . 8/28/2013 raises hand, thought he was dead, sweet twist, poor don, (lets go dumpster diving shredder, (I'll pull a Kacey Jones on ya) |
| majestic.beauty.sealed.in.ice chapter 1 . 8/1/2013 Wow fabulous! And yeah whole time was like is Leo dead? But I liked ur tricky! Lol got the story interesting and got me reading so yep good job on that and fantastic job! Loved the fic! Hope to read more from a wonderful author! |
| TheOneThatGotAway99 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013 Oh thank goodness! I was like "Leo had better just be meditating, connecting to his brother's spirit in his time of need, because if my Leo is dead I will hate this story for all eternity!" You had me worried for a bit with all your '"You know why..."'s and '"when he's-"'s. It was a good story. Veeeery tricky xD -TheOne(WhoWasFooled) |
| Tigress2929 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013 Yup, I did think leo died. Great story, I enjoyed it! :) |
| madagascarmaster chapter 1 . 12/30/2012 Okay, you had me for a moment there! Then I got into comparing what was happening in your story, to what was gonna happen in my story! You'd be surprised how similar they are! |
| nim draug chapter 1 . 5/28/2011 this is very clever- well done :) |
| Genbu chapter 1 . 5/5/2009 I saw through it once he talked about 'catching' Plus in your desciption you never mentioned a chaarcter death. Normally people are nice enough to warn us. |
| quali chapter 1 . 12/6/2008 Anyone who's seen the first live action TMNT movie would have seen through that. _ Leo's always been the best at meditation. |
| jade dex chapter 1 . 8/18/2008 ypure good, but not that good. kow know, thers something to be said about caffinited tea... great story. will you be continuwing it? i liked it. |
| Leepet chapter 1 . 6/10/2008 I thought he was dead for a second but then I thought he was on the other line of that headset thing Don always wears. Through meditation- interesting. |
| dearjoan chapter 1 . 3/4/2008 Poor Donatello! ... And poor me, because you really did make me think you'd killed off Leo! I really liked the Ninja Tribunal episodes, and I like this tag for them. Thanks! |
| SubtleBubbles chapter 1 . 2/29/2008 Man you're good! I kind of did think Leo was dead, if he wasn't somehow mentally communicating with Donatello through his mind while meditating or something... Great story too! |
