Amazing story! I love how you have written Jareth. Such a strong tragic prince you don't want him to stop fighting, but you can't help but hope that Sarah beats him again at his game and sees through his rouse to see him for who he really is. I like Christian too, but that just makes Sarah's decision more difficult. So great job writing it that way.

a lovely story...but incomplete..

What happens next?

I think that you have had enough of a break...get back to work now. PLEASE! You can't just leave us hanging? Please please PLEASE finish this.

PLEASE FINISH...

*frowns* And of course, it's abandoned. Grumble grumble grumble.

Well, you shouldn't have abandoned this! I like it. It's nicely done. I like your original characters, and your Jareth and Sarah characterization is very good. Maybe you'll continue some day?

~May

Aww. . .somehow, even though Sarah was completely hammered, that was really sweet. Christian will be pissed. :S

*shudders* Ugh, I hate it when villains molest their captors. Makes me want to vomit. Grr. I hope Jareth doesn't get hurt. . .

Briliant encounter. Sarah is very stupid for trying to eat fruit in the Underground. *rolls eyes*

O, nice ne. I feel bad for Sarah, what with her old friends being dead and all, but at least this is one step forward for her and Jareth. lol.

""But Jareth, he's," Her lips pursed in deep seated emotion, "He's selfish and uses people, manipulating them to get his own way. He’s cruel, arrogant, presumptuous, twisted…"

"Anyone I know?""

*grins* Timing a la Jareth.

And, eek. . .that was one hell of a tense conversation between Jareth and Sarah while they danced. This entire thing is kind of strange. Very, very strange.

I am really liking this fic. Very original, well-written. I'm still unnerved by that dream Sarah had though. eek. And I want to know who Alanna is. . .

Holy hell. That was some dream. When Sarah started screaming, I could picture everything perfectly. . .it was wild. Eek. Hopefully that wasn't a premonition.

Oh! This is interesting. I don't think I've ever read it before. And it looks like it's going to be a good one, too.

I'll finish reading it tomorrow. :)

I suppose its futile to ask you to finish your story but Ive got to try...

PLEASE FINISH YOUR STORY! :(