Very nice, and very different. It's like Naruto has been forced into slavery as a gladiator for the emperor's amusement. It's really original. But one error, you spell Jiraiya's name wrong but it's a mistake most people can make. This story if done right has great potential to be a classic.

wow, great fic!

wonder what happened to itachi though?

not bad.

Pretty good. Kind of narration-heavy. Maybe some thoughts in italics would help, and more dialog. There are just too many paragraphs of long text.

And you didn't explain enough for such a severe AU fic. It was a bit confusing.

Holy... damn, that was an epic first chapter O_o i can't wait for more, I love the more dark stories around. So much more interesting. Also i have to say that this was very well written _ looking foreard to th next chapter.