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This is some time ago, of coure, and I don't know if you still come here and will see this. But I just wanted to tell you that I liked this piece.

Your somewhat formal, oldfashioned style and convoluted sentences fits Walburga Black's personality perfectly. I didn't like it so much in your piece about Lupin, but it's perfect here. The moment when she realises this will actually be the last she will ever hear from her son made something inside me move - very genuine, very sad in all its finality. She cannot turn away from her path anymore, but somewhere the mother in her regrets. Well done.

Beautiful and tragic. Maybe the Potters were the same, but couldn't bare to lose their eldest son like that. Probably tolerated his antics in hopes he'd settle down.

*Thoughtful*

I have to honestly say I absolutly love your style of writing. You write amazing well and in character, and I can actually picture everything in my head. You have now become my favorite author in this peticular catagory. _ Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see more from you.