This is such an interesting premise and probably the first time I wasn't afraid to read something Johnny-Centric (kinda). Anyhow, I love how you reconstructed the storyline for the first movie, but manage to keep Johnny unaware of what occured between him and the higher being (whose name escapes me, assuming she had a name). And Ben with the ability to turn his powers off was a nifty trick.

Overall, if You ever decide to continue this,

I'll be around.

Sakura123

This is really good! I think this idea is really original. I can't wait to see what happens next.

It's cool that Ben's able to control what his body looks like. However, I have no idea what exactly he was doing during the storm, and I found the part of him discovering his powers to be confusing.

This is great! Keep going!

Hey, I think you've got the beginning of a great story here! I can't wait for the next chapter!

awesome! I love alternate reality stories. Can't wait for more!

i like it.

enough said.

update soon.

Hm... Johhny unable to turn off his flames. Interesting. I like it! Please update soon!

Interesting plot idea, nice writing. Only problem is a few grammer errors that made a few sentance's confusing, and the whole chapter went fast and was kind of one-D on the emotional level, but other than the few errors everyone is in character, I think and it is over-all awsome-ness. Yay!

:) Update soon please!

And... I must learn to talk less...