Waah!
It was so touching!
And the last 2 chapters made me think of Kagerou Daze

JESUS, ROY! DICK MOVE ALERT!

the ending what have you done to me!

I can't believe this. Ed is tortured, broken, suicidal, and all of his friends brushed the idea of helping him away like it is some kind of joke and Ed is a disease. So much for good friends. Good fic though, the plot is very interesting.

I'm sorry, I can't keep reading this
;-;
Can't deal with Al being dead ...
It's nothing wrong with your writing, I just care too much for fictional characters
*cries until death and then cries in the afterlife*

WHAT-
WHAT THE-

YOU KILLED AL?!
*cries for rest of life*
I should have read the description more carefully
*cries for rest of eternity*

An amazing story. Very well written. I don’t cry for most stories that I read but this one really got to me. I’m not sure how I feel about how you ended it but it is a better ending than most. A very deep story. Super sad and super good.

*This story fills you with SADNESSSSSSS

Ch 1:
HUG HIM

sat here reading this all night.. I loved it so much! I'm moving right onto that sequel now~

Really good job! I'm a sucker for the parental! royed fics and this is probably one of my favorites!

Kill Mustang's mom. I don't care how you do it, get the Homunculi to murder her or something. Although if that does happen, whichever Homunculi who kills her will probably become my favourite.

wow..

idk.. this one is.. without a doubt one of the most refined (angsty) FMA story.. there's no happy elric even in just one chapter, heck.. edward 'literally' crying in every chapter but this one.. D:

but this is a great fic, regardles.. now pls excuse me i need a bag of tissues..

A couple of grammar mistakes i.e. Watch should be see but a pretty good story

I can't read this. First chapter in and the half-part really rubbed off of me the wrong way. Alphonse is dead and the Team Mustang crew are laughing over Roy's inability to handle kids. The fuck?! What a deal breaker.