Reviews for Golden Feathers
RinneganGod chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
i like the begining,please continue the story,besides i love this couple
WayDrifter chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Good story
Anal Sewage chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
pretty good!
eloelay chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
this is the second or third time i've read this, and i can't believe i hadn't reviewed it yet.

this story is definitely distinct, and one of my favourite one-shots in this fandom, as well as one of the most memorable (:

your characterization was spot on, realistic, and altogether charming.

you're just incredibly good at life!
Captain Deadpool chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Very funny and cute.
spedclass chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Awesome story!
Blademan44 chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Truly I cannot say why, but I just cannot get enough of this pairing! And quite frankly this was a jewel of a one-shot. I definetly hope you decide to make a multi-chapter story about this pairing! Anyways enjoyed the story!
ridorana.ao3 chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Awh! I loved it so much! What a cute story. You're a great writer, and I must say I love how you portrayed vaan's emotions toward fran. A couple I never would have guessed in a million years! I favorited it.
Miribai chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
I ususally stick to cannon with FFXII, but the summary intrigued me so I read it. This story was actually very cute and very well written. I like the characterizations, they were captured very well. The premise was new an interesting. Very good, made me smile!
dark drow chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
priceless XD, great writing coupled with good humer and the rare vaan/fran was just iceing on the top, excellent one shot! cant wait to see what youll write next :3
shika chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
very good, I’m hoping this well break the ice so to speak, so there well be more vaan/fran stories. hopefully some long, none oneshots, stories but any is good.
Fluffy Kitty Oni chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Aw, so cute! *Huggles* I never liked vaan/fran before, but now you have converted me...*wanders off to find more*
Yasminesoul chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Hehe! This is cute. Vaan makes me laugh. I didn't think I would like this. But, I love it!
Ripper-Roo chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
That was probably one of the cutest stories ever.
Kirek chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Ah, great, another one! I love reading these fran/vaan one-shots. :P

Very subtle and smooth, carefully building up to the end. I must say I'm surprised yet again. In a good way, mind you. A very pleasant read. All in all, I can't say I have any errors or somesuch to point out, which is lovely.

But I have one really big gripe...

*sobs*

It's too short!

Ah well, I hope to see more! More to add to my favourite list!

- Erik.
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