Holy. Fuck.

That was amazingly hot. I loved it. But... for some reason, I kept seeing and hearing Logan in my head, not Tristan... *shrugs* Probably cause I liked him the best haha. But this really was great :)

Oh my, this is crazy good.

heya, tristan is kinda a maniac in this, isn't he?

lol damn she has willpower, but i think we all know what she'll be doing in the car before she drives home. i would have just ignored him till i was done and then yell at him after...loved it! looking forward to more from you

i love tristian

wow that was "HOT". you are an awesome smut writer. tee hee. Looking forward to your new stories.

that was unexpected. she actaully left? but i like how you kept with his commentary. it needed to be finished that way. and your summary, very fitting. amazing story.

Whoa. Loved it. Loved the angst and i really loved how you didn't really focus on the actual event at the part by going into unnessecary detail but instead choosing to focus on the emotions of the characters

I've been putting off reviewing this because it's so amazing, and I wanted to give it the time it deserves (not some rushed two-liner):

Wonderful writing as always. I could feel the bitterness ebbing off of Tristan as their conversation about the party took place. The imagery you put to the fight and the sex made the story undeniably pungent; I was shivering after she delivered the line "You...are...fucking crazy". And the ending? I was floored to say the least, not what I was expecting at all (similar to Meet Me at the Bleachers). Though it is perfect in its stand-alone glory, I can't help but wonder what you would do with this should you continue? Consider it. Thanks for a great story to add to my favorites.

Um... I usually have reviews that are more than 5 sentences but...

DAMN THAT TURNED ME ON!

Wow, that was so intense. Hot, angsty and just amazingly written. -Amira

This was... I don't know the word... amazing? Seriously, everything was captured so nicely and perfectly that it could have possibly been real. I admire you.

And I know that this is probably what other people are asking, but seriously... is there any other way for you to make this into a multi-chapter fic? It was such a great first chapter. I know sometimes it's hard, and you really don't know a plot and such, but it is so good. I just want more!

Anyways, again. Great job. I applaud. Thanks for writing it.

i seriously wouldnt mind of this becoming a longer story...it has a lot of potential...please make it longer )...i loved it...

This was absolutely amazing.

I wish I knew how to say " I am feeling the heat" in french.