| Reviews for Innamoramento |
|---|
iloveromance chapter 1 . 3/3/2016 I remember reading this a long time ago so I don't know why I didn't' review it back then but it was a pleasure to read it a second time. The whole story is really good and I love that it's in First Person involving both Niles and Daphne. My only 'suggestion' (And I haven't looked at your page so I don't know if you've written other stories since this one so I'm only basing my suggestion on this one story) is that I wish the story would have been separated into chapters to make it easier to read. I'm sure I'll be reading this again, so it's not a big deal. I just prefer the shorter chapters when scrolling on a computer to avoid dizziness! But wow, the lovemaking scene was just perfect. I'm not a person who likes a whole lot of detail so I loved this and was able to fill in the blanks quite nicely! I hope you'll write more of these because you're very good at it. |
me chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 Very well done. This is one of my favorite parts... "And all I wanted to do was kiss the palm of this beautiful hand, kiss his pain away. Not only this pain but all the pain I caused him for the last 7 years..." This part, I can identify with... I won't get into details, but I am living this...except that my "Daphne" is "J" and he gets married next month. I am in a relationship with my dear friend, "N" and it is "comfortable and familiar" and I would never ever ever hurt him ever. I bury my feelings for J as far down as I can. I can withstand it. I am strong...but I wish I could just plain extenguish the flame I feel around J, and have felt around him for nearly 14 years. "My love for Daphne was a passionate, consuming flame, radiating light and heat more intense than a thousand of the brightest suns. But staring at the light was blinding, and standing to close to the heat was burning me alive. The flames within my soul had been burning for 7 years and were now threatening to become the hellfire which consumed me."...I know exactly how this feels...thank you for putting it so poignantly. I do not deserve sympathy though. I feel like a horrible person that I feel so strongly about J- in my defense though...I have been steadfastly committed to N for years...N knows about it and loves me in spite of it all. He is so wonderful! I could not ask for a better person to be with! I am so fortunate to be with N. I am stronger than the feelings I have for J...I do have power over them. I believe it is most imposrtant to put others first...and I will continue to do so...I will spend my life making N as happy as I can... as far as being as good a person as I can try to be, I'm just not sure I can bear to go to the wedding. Hope I can find a good enough excuse not to go...one that is better than, "Ummm...sorry can't make it becacuse I'm in love with the groom." |
Peace Sign Freak chapter 1 . 7/29/2010 Fabulous story! It was absolutely beautiful! I fel exited at some times and other times I felt scared. I laughed and screamed and I loved it. You know, you could change the story's status to 'Complete' because it has closure. Or are you planning to continue the story? You could continue with the story if you wanted to. You do have the talent to continue the story or to prolong the ending. I love that you added a splash of drama, a dash of violence and a cpinch of comedy. I love Innamoramento! |
REMUS IS DODGY chapter 1 . 6/11/2004 Wow. That was beautiful. Thank you. |
kathy chapter 1 . 12/25/2002 What can i say about that story! WOW! that was the best frasier fan fiction i have ever read. The writers did an absolutely stunning job, the way they got right into the characters heads, how they made references to past episodes, brilliant. Well done, and i hope these people continue to write the way they do. well done! i give this 10/10 |
goldenstar555 chapter 1 . 3/23/2002 wow, very good fic, you're a very talented writer, and i loved how you put all that feeling and emotion into this story, nice job! |
Sapphire Rose chapter 1 . 12/28/2001 Oh. My. God. I am completley LOVING this! OMG this is fantastic! You got the personalities of Niles and Daphne perfectly. my god, I love David Hyde Pierce *drools a puddle*...yummy... |
daydreamer chapter 1 . 12/14/2001 Incredible. Wonderful, beautiful, profound, poetic. Simply incredible. |
adelle chapter 1 . 11/12/2001 That was brilliant. Wonderful, extremely touching, poetic...simply brilliant. |
tim chapter 1 . 9/30/2001 We have the same name! OMG! I sucked $hit from ma pants last night too! egg fart'd b'karted nicely. OHHH! Ma $hit smells sooo good! |
Kati chapter 1 . 9/14/2001 Wow! Poetic, evocative, emotional. And worthy of more than one cold shower, too... ;) |
Devilchop chapter 1 . 7/23/2001 wooooooooooooooooooooooo! good job, you guys! kay, I'm just gonna hop in the shower now...lol... Lani |
Eileen chapter 1 . 7/19/2001 That was awesome! I love the twist of one person writing Daphne's part and another person writing Niles'... when one person tries to write two POV's there doesn't seem to be any point in the second, just the same story told in slightly different words, but you guys found a great way around that. And you're both really good writers. Bravo! |
just me chapter 1 . 7/19/2001 That was such a fantastic story, I felt I just had to tell you how much I loved it. It was sweet and beautiful, and I was crying by the end! Thankyou very much. |