Wow. Wowowow this was so fantastically written, and so terrifying. You can really feel what Winry is feeling, and the way you wrote this flows so well. Fantastic work!

Oh my god. I don't think words can even describe how much this hurt me. In the best way possible. Or the worst? I don't even know, but this was one of the fics that tears you into pieces and then doesn't give you any sort of time where you can put yourself back together. You write so beautifully, the story flowed so effortlessly, the characterization and reactions all so beautifully painful.
Kimblee really is one twisted character ...
I can't wait to read on, but I just had to leave a review on this part of the story.

This was amazing... I just... Please I need more one where Ed finds out or Al...

Oh. My. Friggin. God. This is so angsty, yet beautifully written. God, my respect for Winry just multiplied a thousand-fold. Willing to sacrifice herself for Ed.

This was dark and hideous but from a place of light. Well written. Great job.

Incredible. I read the second part first, and I almost like it better that way. So heart-wrenching and painful to imagine...tragically detailed and vivid. Simply amazing.

Immaculate in every way.

I hope you update this. I really like how well written it is.

Holy crap! I am so into this.

It's angsty, it's deliciously dark and hopeless. Good god.

Dark indeed and very intricate.

I guess Winry-centric stories are your specialty. I'm a huge EdWin fan, and I think that you have a very clear writing style that conveys your message well. Many authors lack the ability to write and have their reader actually "get" what the author is trying to say. Great grammar and spelling, by the way).

I especially applaud for moving a story along! Its a very delicate process, keeping a reader's interest, as the story might move too slowly (overly-descriptive stories on a FANFICTION website is not a good idea) or too quickly (kiss, sex, babies, WTF?), but you've got it down, lady. Transition from scenes is effective and your writing is delightfully skinny. Which means you cut out the fat that nobody want to read).

A small concern is that she seems more like a character to pity, not to admire or sympathize. I only grieve that she's become a whore to save Ed's soul. The story very successfully makes Winry look like an angel sent to hell, and that image is one that many readers would compare to a hyperactive Cinderella. Well, just an opinion.

You've got talent, though. I enjoy reading your works).

OMG that was awsome! Yuo are a GREAT writer. I'm off to read the others.

up, UP and AWAY!

-SNAP! Tubiume!

INTENSE.

This is very, very good. _

cool story