Its been over 10 years now, and I still check this story for an update. I know it won't ever get an update, but I still enjoy reading it.

Wow, its been around 8 years and I still cannot forget this story. There's a little part of me that still that hopes that one day, I'll check my email and find this story updated. I hope you find the inspiration again for this story someday, I know there's many people who would be happy and excited if you did.

over 8 years and NO update (

I have read KuroSora1984's stuff and I enjoy her writing but I actually like yours more. I mean, finding you was more than a pleasant surprise. I am completely fascinated by your writing and I already know that I will have a love affair with all of your stories. I didn't know that she Beta'd... meaning she may have had influence somewhat on your work... but you blew me away. I mean just wow, your attention to detail is incredible. Your pacing is great. I still cannot believe that English is not your first language. Wow. The way you write made me feel for the characters and exactly what they were going through. It's beautifully vivid. Seriously. I think you are amazing.
As far as this chapter... I didn't mind the talking here, I think it was necessary. I'm sorry that you struggled with it but I understand too. I have the same problem sometimes. I am hoping to soothe the writer's ocd a bit here: I think it was perfect. For everything they went through and their own insecurities I think that how you wrote it was how it needed to be written. It was also a testament to their personalities. The bathtub thing? I can totally see this Axel doing that. It caught me off guard but in a good way and it added humor when everything was tense, which was actually really nice.
I think you did great with the whole piece and I actually binged on it, start to finish, which is something I have not done in a very long time. I think that you captured their ages perfectly, as well as the high school setting and the trauma Axel, Riku, Zexion and Demyx faced. I love how you made your characters so vivid and developed. I love the humor you bring into this. I love how I haven't read anything like this before. It was even nice, a bit maddening to have to wait but nice, having the interlude to explain what Axel was feeling. It was important.
My head's a bit jumbled from reading SO MUCH haha but I wanted to say that I adore this piece and I hope that my feedback makes you feel good about it. I know how frustrating it is to write so many words and to get two word responses, too. You shouldn't feel bad about that.
I would actually love to see this go even further because there is still more healing that could be done, but if you're done, I understand. Massive story is massive haha and I will love it all the same.

Hey I'm glad you're not rushing this. I think it's really great so far and I love your attention to detail.

Again, you're doing well with English. I only saw two past tense mistakes. They were present tense instead.
I'm enjoying this so far. I like the concept and how you have developed your characters. I'm looking forward to reading more.

You're bad at English? Oh my lord, you're better than most of the writers on here. I thought you were joking about butchering the English language until I read your final note. Seriously, I didn't read a single mistake. I can already tell that I'm going to love you. Well done.

I freaking love this story. I read it before then spent the past month trying to find the story again (I have remembered to favourite it this time)

I just wanted you to know that even after all these years (I was reading way back in 2008) I still come back to read this fic over and over again. Even tho it'll probably never be updated again I'm still glad we at least got a resolution between Axel and Roxas. I don't even know if you still get these reviews but I just wanted you to know how much this fic is loved.

I love this story! I had debated about reading it for so long and then I finally did and this story is great! I'm sad to see where it left off though, is that really the end? If not, I know it's been quite a long time, but I do hope that you would finish it! Very glad I decided to read this story!

I cannot fully describe to you how much I love this fic. It makes me cry and smile and feel hope. You capture all these characters' conflicts and interactions in a way that makes me feel like I know them. You don't pull your punches and you don't shy away from the damage afterwards.

I'm writing a story myself with troubled characters and you make me question whether I'm doing a good enough job. The issues are not so severe but how full bodied your conflicts are make me want to do more in my own work.

I love how you reached a resolution between Axel and Roxas. Those two still have a lot of things to work through but they're both committed to making it work. I would love to know what's up with Sora's hand and see a couple more moments between him and Riku - especially now that Roxas's head is mostly disengaged from his ass.

This story is beautiful (apologies to Axel) and whether you return to complete it or not, it's everything I could ever ask for in an AkuRoku fic and more. You're a wonderful writer and I'd love to see more work from you.

I remember reading this a loooong time ago and decided to start reading it again. You are truly a talented, dedicated writer. For serious. Got it memorized? XD

OMGGGG I READ THIS BY CHANCE BACK IN 2010 AND IVE BEEN LOOKING FOR IT EVER SINCE! IM SO GLAD I FINALLY FOUND IT. OMG HOLY SHIT.

D'aww poor demy :(

Hello! I love the start of this fic! At first I was worried since it seemed a bit bland with the "sons of rich parents" premise but you really captured the emotional dynamic of the situation. I look forward to reading the rest of the story!