Nice story, very creative storyline. My only issue was that much of the time I couldn't tell who was saying what.

dude...

this is awesome... i quite like both halo and stargate... good to see a cross over, however, where is the part were mastercheif comes in and says, "you need a weapon?" hands them a shotgun and they blast their way out wif da shotties... with apophis going "WHAT! Then take us to a nearby planet, we'll have to find a way back." i think apophis comes slightly out of character, but all in all, i thought this was a good start

keep up the good work ;-)

good story, update soon

Love your story! Please say you're gonna update soon? Big SG-1 & Halo fan here!

please to continue this!

Hey the ODSTs are the marines spec ops.

Hey good story. Update soon!

pwez continue this story?

do you realise how sad it is to write fanfic about a game? didn't think so

please write more

fix your grammar, spelling, and that unreasonably large paragraph at the end please.

i want to poin this out,there is not shuch thing as E type blood,only A,B,AB,and O

are you going to finish this

good work

updates plox?

update soon