please wright more!

Update it soon please

Hmm... it does seem a bit rushed at points but that may just be because it's a different version but altogether it is an interesting idea.

I liked it please update soon

Not gonna lie... That last part was badass

Please update soon this is Fucking awesome regards Greekfreek1

Good story

Harry should find out what happened to Sirius' bike, especially since it is modified with magic.

There is an error, you said that every year since Harry's parents death 20 million galleons was removed, then the biggest was last year with 5 million having been taken out. If 20 million was taken each year then 5 million would not have been the biggest. Did you instead mean to say that in total 20 million had been taken over the years since his parents death with the largest being 5 million the past year?

Why did Harry ask for more cash when he had what he took from the person he killed earlier as he only turned over what was owed to Pat?

I've enjoyed you work quite a bit.

I was working as a proof reader for another author but got hit with demands at my joy that had me only available sporatically.

He finally moved on and I certainly couldn't blame him at all.

I hope things work out for you to continue with your fanfiction.

Best regards,

SteveC.

glock and beretta

Great story! Are you still continuing this?

For Gods sake, PLEASE finish this. This is by far the best story I've ever read in Fanfiction. If you have posted more on other places, PLEASE let me know how to find it. GREAT Wonderful story and very well written. I think you should be very proud and pleased with your efforts.
I never enjoyed a story more,
Ron Pate

Traveler301

update this amazing story soon please!

This review for whole story- I gave up when I encountered 'Glork' and 'Barrette'. You desperately need a beta who can spell