it's very cute...and the start of something that could be amazing. I would love to see it finished...

It made me smile. Their banter is worth it. :)

Pretty good...Oh who am I kidding? IT WAS WONDERFUL! _

Loving the KakaIru.

That was awesome. .

I don't know if I could finish it either. Even if you never do, it's still good enough to comment on because the dialog had me laughing so hard. Oh, Kakashi. It's clear you were homeschooled in witty repartee.

Hello,

This is very interesting you should continue with this, please.

Oh, I like it. feisty!Iruka is a rare treasure, you know. It puts a whole new spin on things. And you had me laughing the whole way through. Hurrah for non-mushy-motherly-soft Iruka.

And hurrah for originality in plot. xD

I worship you for this. seriously.

homg. I absolutely loathe KakashixIruka, hate it in the background, hate it in the foreground, hate the idea and hate the sound. I hate it while I'm walking and talking and breathing and thinking.

But this. I now love it.

Okay, I lied, I still don't like it, but, finally, they're not portrayed as Iruka being motherly (can't be motherly when you're trucking a dead body around) and Kakashi being sweet to him ('as Kakashi had made the instant and bratty decision not to like him.' YES.). And as soon as Iruka sees it's him, "Oh Christ not you."

The best comeback ever, courtesy of Kakashi: “Like man whore me senseless?”

Freaking hilarious. I still don't like KakashixIruka, but I love THIS.

That wasn't horrible at all. o

Really very good, actually. One of the better stories I've read, and beleive me, I've read a shit-load. I've love to see what eventually happens. D

*Favorites*

You know it's slightly worrying that /you/ don't know why Iruka's dragging a dead body...

I'd love to read the answer if you think of one

Great story, true to Kakashi style and I absolutely love your Iruka! Bowage from moi!

ahahaha this is great. it relay hspould be continued. i love iruka like this all pissy. ahahah you made my day xD

This story cracked me up - from the first few paragraphs to the very last. I seriously hope you write more stories like this! Ahh, Kakashi, your social skills are lacking. In a good way!

NICE!

Explain the other body, PLEASE!

xD

I LOVE it!

The concept for your story is good. You can do a lot with it from chapter one's ending. Good imagination. Watch your grammer, though. There are some phrases that your are using that makes no sense to the average reader. Always proofread your work before you post. I hope you add more chapters to this. Keep up the good work.

and just why IS he carrying that dead body, hmm? care to add more kakairu to this, maybe with iruka's pov instead?

u could start with y he killed th guy, move on to his meeting kakashi, and thn whatever u feel should happen after.