Very well written.

:)

nice

very cool but im pretty sure lupin didnt start at hogwarts till 3rd year ill have to check.

Um, is this a chapter story? Cause I REEEEALLY don't see the reason

Wormy betrayed James. I mean, they were nice to him! The darn no

good rat. *I hate him*

"That was stupid. Stories like these are the source of world corruption, therefore the source of the plane-hijacking stunt pulled on the Twin Towers in NY."

That wasn't very nice. Why would you even say something like that?

you didn't say WHY!

cool.

This story was pretty good but I think it needs more detail. For example the part where Lily comes in and the part about Harry.

You have a great talent, Cassie. I love your theory on how Wormtail betrayed Harry's parents. Keep up the writing. That's how I got where I am now. I'm happy that Hermione C. showed me your work. It is really great to find someone with such great talent for writing.

Joanne Kathleen Rowling

I don't think Voldemort is that patience and won't say please come on we're talking Voldemort most evil dark wizard here. but it was awsome i thought it was cool

The part where Voldemort shouted " DAMNIT! WHERE THE HELL ARE THEY?" Was REALLY FUNNY!

It was good.

it could have done with a bit more detail but i still liked it. keep writing.

Proffeser Mcgonagal and Hagrid would be 11 just like James , Peter (yuck) , Sirius , and Remus.

Yes, why?