So romantic... It's totally awesome!

Magnificent writing and establishment of character. I just wish there were more to read. Your Luneth and Refia are absolutely lovely!

Wow, this was a great story! I wish there was more :-P I loved the characters personalities and interactions with each other. Your writing was brilliant in the fighting scene. Excellent work :-D

"Aww," was what I said at the end of the chap, not because it was cheesy, but it was really well done )

Your writing style, and OH your creativity in writing that fight scene was brilliant!

~:D

Nice first chapter. I really liked how you described the battle. You're very talented.

Hey, finally an FFI fic that doesn't make my eyes bleed! I like your interpretations of the characters, it rings very true to the way they play in the DS game. Thanks for writing this!

With this as the only mention of LunethxRefia I have EVER found and the ONLY HIT ON GOOGLE (!), I am left wondering what is wrong with people today. I am eternally grateful to you for putting up such a great and completely un-superficial story, AND putting in my favourite pairing from FF3! If they put separate categories for each FF game, although the list would be huge, it would be that much easier.

Thank you.

It's so... beutiful.

Aw, you updated it! Yay! I really loved the first chapter and I like the second chapter even more~ The way you write the chapters, the characters' feelings and personalities are just awesome. I hope you'll write more FFI fanfics. Especially Luneth/Refia. Hurhurhur~

FF3 het? And Luneth/Refia even! Such rarity!

Casting aside my astonishment, this is quite the pleasant read. We never really did get much character development and interactions in the game (which is a real damn shame), so reading this was a joy.

I love how you delved deeper into their (Refia's, to be more specific) doubts and fears which the game seemed to have completely forgotten about (among other things). The budding affection between Luneth and Refia was both amusing and believable; I likedhow you characterized them both, so seeing them get into those sort of tensions makes the fangirl in me squeal with delight.

Although the last paragraph here put me off a little bit, I'm looking forward for more FF3 fanfics from you. Keep building _

Hehe, I really liked this chapter.

You describe things so well I could almost imagine the scenes take place.

Keep it up!

Ah! I love this! The characters interaction development in the actual game was kinda well...poo but I like what you're doing so far. _

I loved the ending the best.

Hope you update this.

Omg that was so cute! no one writes about luneth/refia but they should;) its so good u should write another one!

Awesome; another FF3 fic! It's even Luneth/Refia, no less. The descriptions and details also drew me into this one, so keep updating! :]

There are very few FF3 fics here, so I'm glad that I ran into one! A pretty good one, too!

I enjoyed the character interaction and your description of the battles, but the fight did become a bit tedious-I think you went a bit too overboard with describing some things and neglected to describe other things. However, I enjoyed your characterizations of the Warriors of Light, especially Luneth!

I do hope you continue it. :-)