Reviews for Fragments |
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FriendlyFire chapter 26 . 7/8 I really hope there's more chapters of this story line. |
FriendlyFire chapter 25 . 7/8 Even though I have never read or seen more than a few clips of Naruto these are hilarious. |
FriendlyFire chapter 23 . 7/7 Wow, that was fun. Sooo, what did Luna have to "pay" for Harry's help? (eyebrow wiggle) |
FriendlyFire chapter 10 . 7/7 I love how ultimate evil is thwarted by Tuna! |
Balder chapter 17 . 5/25 I liked this chapter. :) |
Guest chapter 65 . 5/5 Fyi. actually directly telling that it's a Futurama reference ruins the joke: "From the world of tomorrow!" Xander said imitating the guy who woke people from cryo-sleep in Futurama |
Guest chapter 61 . 5/5 affect, not effect |
Guest chapter 61 . 5/5 Damn, just loving and running, I was hoping more would happen with Raven. |
typo chapter 51 . 5/5 It mas much harder - It was much harder |
Ibskib chapter 51 . 5/5 " have flamethrower hidden" have a flamethrower hidden |
Guest chapter 27 . 5/4 the Dursley's - the Dursleys |
Guest chapter 54 . 5/4 Show don't tell. Them betting their virginity would be a lot funnier if it was written out properly. |
Guest chapter 54 . 5/4 "its muggle" it's |
Guest chapter 50 . 5/4 "That mind jutsu whose name dogbertcarroll can't remember!" Just spend 10 sec looking it up, it's not funny, just lazy. |
typo chapter 48 . 5/4 "the Tendo's" the Tendos |