Can I just sayI love love love this fanfic, I mean I always though that Orehime would be great with Byakuya but dayme.. You killed, the pairing is fantastic.. It works okay

Your fic is so cool, good luck I'm very excited to read the next chapters

Wow. That's a beautiful ending!
Just wanna say something that you mentioned Ulquiorra putting on her hairpins shortly after he woke up. But then, you wrote that he took out and put it on her again after the "queen" scene.

JESUS CHRIST! Don't go around asking for reviews in such a rude manner. If people want to review, they will review. Stop demanding shit and most of all stop acting as if the world revolves around your fanfic. People that run charities don't go around bitching at the rich to donate money just like how you're bitching at the readers to review if they have time. They don't owe you anything, you are the person who decided to write this fanfic, it was never demanded at gun point. Not to mention, it makes people feel uncomfortable since its demanded in such a rude and immature, in all honestly you're just upsetting your readers by speaking to them in such a condescending and patronizing manner! If reviews are what keep you going and nothing else does, well sorry to break it you hun, you are NOT fit to be a writer what so ever. I just hope that you are young and this all stems from the immaturity and rashness that comes with being a dumb teenager. This will never work well for you ever in a professional environment or in life down the road.

Good bye.

Hold the fuck up! I know I'm really late to this fic but you're really fourteen? Get out! Your writing and narration is so well done! When I was fourteen I couldn't tell the difference between then and than! LOL! I'm honestly shook, but like in a really good way...

MY GOD ITS SO GOOD YOURE ONLY 14

I like that your story provides an inside look into what happened between Ulquiorra and Orihime while she was held captive in Los Noches. To be frank, I think your story is a bit rough around the edges. Ulquiorra and Orihime are both out of character. I understand that you're developing a relationship between them but that doesn't mean that they'd completely change their behavior. Ulquiorra wouldn't have been so quick to call Orihime by her given name, he wouldn't have allowed her to enter his personal space, and I don't think he would have spent so much time in her cell. He went from barely entering her cell to hanging out with her far too quickly. As for Orihime, she is a bubbly character but she wouldn't have been so...silly considering she was being held prisoner. Yes, perhaps she would have made an effort to get to know Ulquiorra but she wouldn't have been building pillow forts and pretending to be a monster. It's not very realistic. I also noticed quite a few grammatical errors in your writing. If you're planning to consider this your rough draft, I think it's great. However if this is your final draft, you should find someone to proof read it and give your corrective criticism. That said, you have a lot of potential as a writer so please don't let this review discourage you.

Oh, and if you're looking to gain fans, perhaps you shouldn't rant and rave at them. Most people would have stopped reading your story after the fourth chapter once they saw your little hissy fit. If you're going to be a writer, understand that not everyone is going to review your work and not everyone will enjoy it. You are writing stories for the entertainment of others, correct? It's unprofessional and immature to yell at your potential fans over something as trivial as reviews.

Anyway, I hope I wasn't too harsh and as I said earlier, I hope you don't see this review or any review for that matter as discouragement. Look at it as corrective criticism. I hope you continue to write and continue to improve a little more with every chapter.

Sincerely,

Elara.

Best ulquihime fanfic I've ever read. Thank you for making Ulquiorra fall for her first.

That being said on my last review. I am enjoying the story so far. I love this pairing and I'm looking forward to see where you take them. Keep up the good work!

Uhm I was enjoying the read; until I read the authors note at the bottom. You should just be happy that your readers are taking the time to add you a a favorite or an alert, not go off at them for not reviewing.

I feel like you could have worded that in a better way that didn't make it sound like you were demanding even more time from your readers, which some of them might actually be really busy and are reading your stories on their break at work. Hmm food for thought maybe.

I really enjoyed this ulquihime fanfic, it was really well written and interesting. It's really cool how ulquiorra and orihime became king and queen of Hueco Mendo. Thankyou for creating this fanfic!

Happy birthday!

Good job

You said that you wanted rewiew, sooo... I like it! :D

I lost my interest when you added the part of ichigo being died