Reviews for Two Hearts: Serenade
Miratriarch chapter 36 . 12/19/2017
before anyone who reads this fic go read the oneshot "Two Hearts" first it's going to make much more sense that way
Miratriarch chapter 24 . 12/19/2017
how can something be so heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time damn so cute
Wei Wuxian Yiling Patriarch chapter 36 . 12/19/2017
wow just plain amazing
yukimae86 chapter 36 . 3/17/2017
Good i decided to look at your other stories i was really sad that the first story ended like that, i really cried on the first part, ypur story is so amazing! Anyway im wondering if you were a filipino? is a really high end hospital here in philippines
Tuesday'sHere chapter 36 . 10/7/2016
All of this from a one-shot, damn. Two Hearts on its own was good but this continuation was gold. It really was it was a gradual buildup of emotions, of learning, of love, and finding yourself in a mature way. Everything they suffered through and everything they had was realistic and that made it so easy to relate to. It was beautiful and I loved it, not everything is perfect and life is hard but when you want something bad enough you find ways to make it work through the sacrifices and make it worth it.

Thank you so much for this wonderful journey, I cried, I laughed, I squealed, got jealous, and hurt for them but that is what makes great literature. Thank you for this.
Tuesday'sHere chapter 35 . 10/7/2016
Do you hear my fangirl squeals and see my fangirl tears?! Because there were alot of them in this chapter! The brothers getting back together in the way they should have always been, they love each other too much to be separated like that. That entire family deserves to be happy, to actually let themselves love each other and to let the others know that they are loved it is so damn beautiful!

Damn I want that wedding! It was so beautiful and all those lovely dresses but mostly I want that groom damn it I want that groom! Itachi in wedding attire? Excuse me while I go drool...

Yes things are slowly working out I'm so happy! Thank you so very much for this story!
Tuesday'sHere chapter 28 . 10/7/2016
Wow this Sasuke seems so mature and wise, he's always been smart but he's usually portrayed as being too forceful and aggressive in getting what he wants. Here he obviously has selfish wants but is willing to put those aside (even though it hurts him) just to make Naruto happy and that is a wonderful thing and part of what makes reading about adult characters so great. Good thing he cares so much about Naruto's happiness and made sure to tell him about his friends and kissed him before leaving so that Naruto would follow him! Not intentional but still it worked!

I so freaking (like you don't even know!) adore the relationship between Shikamaru, Chouji, Kiba, Shino, and Naruto. Seriously just getting those guys together is worth so damn much! It is funny, meaningful, exciting, crazy, a bit wild, but just so good! How the 4 stuck together all those years and so readily welcomed Naruto back and are ready to be beside him in his journey, seriously is the best part of this story! The power of friendship believe it! (BBAHAHAHAHAHAH)

Itachi and Ino? Never considered it before (never really thought about someone for Itachi besides Sasuke and that's definitely a guilty pleasure hehe) and after reading that she loved him I took a moment to think about the pairing and I think that personality wise Ino is just too much of a girly-girl, too loud, and too intense and just wouldn't mesh well with Itachi's calm, quiet, and reserved personality. Who knows opposites attract and differing personalities can bring out the best in each other but that's just after a moments thought. Now fanart is a different story, visually they could be totally fucking hot together! All the contrasting colors (all that beautiful hair, we all know Ino takes damn good care of it and I just want to run my fingers through Itachi's hair. I'm sorry I just love it!) and they are both very beautiful so yeah there are probably some amazing fanarts of them that I would be down to check out.

I can't put this down thank you for writing it and I can't wait to see how it all unfolds!
BreattMarie chapter 26 . 2/10/2015
Ohmygod. I just came across this continuation and am having the hardest time finishing it. Im crying at every chapter and what makes it worse is that Selena Gomez "The Heart Wants What it Wants" was just playing. And now Rixton "Me and My Broken Heart" is playing. Dammit im a sniveling mess. This is such a good story though and I cannot wait until I get to the end. But this is one of those stories that I'll ever only be able ro read once or else I'll just die from heartbreak and frustration.
OceanSprings chapter 36 . 1/13/2013
OMFG I LOVE THIS FANFICTION! GOD YOU MADE ME CRY AND YELL IN MY HOME, THANK GOD NO ONE ELSE IS HOME XD. GREAT JOB AND STORY!
Guest chapter 36 . 10/7/2012
I love happy endings! *gushes* I think they're definitely made for each other. Sigh.
mementomori666 chapter 36 . 6/4/2012
Well...that went rather...smoothly..

( ._.)
oofuri111 chapter 15 . 6/4/2012
I hate that mother-hean iruka sooooo anoying! Good story
mementomori666 chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
This chapter is simply heartbreaking...and I'm loving every moment of it.

*continues on reading*
Swallowed-By-Pain chapter 24 . 2/3/2012
Omg , I was reading this chapter and listening to The Story- The gray's anatomy cast , and then half way through i realized that this song was perfect lol! you should listen to it and think about this fic!
SasuNaruSasu01 chapter 36 . 1/29/2012
YOU ARE SOOOOOOOOOOO LUCKY THAT I DECIDED TO REVIEW EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER!

I ONLY READ COMPLETED ONES, BESIDES ONE OR TWO!

HAPPY ENDING!

-has a vision of Naruto in a white dress with sasuke in a black suit with a whithe rose-
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