Interesting. I wish u would continue it. Kinda sad u skipped the lemon scene would of been an interesting turn of events

Rather sweet, and interesting how you created a 'new' card to explain the discrepency in Sakura's behavior. The tomb dust, was a bit of a stretch...and why would have Fujitaki-san find it 'necessary' to use something like that?

All in all, though, entertaining and sweet. Sweet enough, I think, to be added to my 'favorites' list.

*Feeds review rabbit*

it is good considering it is AU. and Tomoyo really does hold the strongest magic. the ability to love without conditions is the hardest of all.

can't there be a sequel?

You did a great job with them _

Omedetto gozaimasu

Well, I don't know if you consider this as constructive criticism. I admit I'm no japanese-speaking expert, but I've always heard that nee-san is sister and not brother nii-san is brother... as far as I know, I have this book that confuses me a little, but I won't go into details.

Anyways, also, I don't know if that's what you wanted to say, but "doushite" is "why" not "what", "nani" is "what".

And, yah, liking the story by the way ) he he

Beautiful. :D...Lol Wtf was Sakura's dad doing? Rofl...If I was her parent I wouldn't even WANT to think about them doing stuff. XD! I'm glad everyone accepted them. :)

Ohayo emirim,

great story but...ahem koff koff u get wat i mean.

Its a gd story, but i prefer the other one with sakurazaki emiri...not vr inventive huh Hippo...

noe who i am yet? hee hee

write mroe good stories!

one heck of a story i must say. i'v never read anything more weird. it was unusual and pretty good. you should write sakuXsyao fictions 'cause you've got good expression.