nicely done. you captured them perfectly.

This was adorable and wonderful and I’m gonna read this again because it’s gorgeous! Love the story!

Hello Shino.

Oh god my heart ;-;
thank you for this cute quality fic

Aww, this is a cute story and they really are very in character. Quite surprising I must say, but altogether very appreciated. Well done on this fanfic. I loved it. And at the end, ya somehow know they'll work it all out. :) 3

I loved this! I adore this couple and I'm hard pressed to find any good fanfics these days. Thank you very much

NICE! I love how you made their insecurity reverse their normal dynamic, it's very realistic. You didn't rush anything and I think that you kept them in character.

Cute :3

Chiki -not chori- waz here!

This is the best Shino/Kiba fic I've ever read. I love how you really get inside both of their heads, show their different thought patterns and personalities. It's so in character for this not to be easy for either of them, but the struggle makes the ending even more satisfying.

You kinda left things unresolved you know. It was long, drawn out, and extremely confusing and in the end you didn't resolve anything! *deep breath* it was still good though.

I just wanted to say that this is a great fic. Even though I agree with many others that the middle part seems a bit overly long and overwrought, several incredible touches throughout really make up for it.

I loved Hana and Kurenai (genjutsu ftw!) and Hinata.

And it has one of the best last lines of any fic I've ever read.

I loved this! It was adorable and I loved Shino freaking out. Great job!

One of the cutest ShinoKiba fics Ive ever read...

I'm fairly new to this pairing but have to say I'm quickly becoming hooked. And this story has not helped, t'was absolutely awesome. I've always been one to think too much so I quite enjoyed the thoughts of each character being played out. Must say I quite like your writing style as well. Thanks for posting!

~wolfpack3422

This was a very long story, but gratifyingly so. The inner monologues were natural and understandably jumpy. I liked the more aggressive characterisation of Hana, it was a nice change.