| Reviews for A Strange Arrival |
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Guest chapter 10 . 6/16/2014 FRODO YOUR SI GAY KISS SAM THAT WOULD BE CUTE ASDFGHHKL |
Kairi Angel is unappricieated chapter 26 . 12/25/2007 and cannot spell. What's this I don't see about me being thanked for drawing all the stuff. Like Kris and the whole crew. Rawr. ;-; |
Maira Luca chapter 25 . 12/18/2007 I can't believe it's already over! I was so into it, I never realized it would end :P . Well, I think you did a good job. Congrats on finishing A Strange Arrival! ~ML~ |
Supernovocaine chapter 25 . 12/17/2007 Make a sequel...please! I'm begging you!*whine* *regains composure* Umm...anyway, I liked this story a lot. I accidentally skipped the A/N at the beginning but I did feel the deja vu and thought, "Again?" Did they...will they...are Ed and Robyn gonna-you know? Make EdRobyn babies? I mean, forget it! Don't tell me, I don't wanna know. Don't tell me anything! Did I mention I liked this story a lot (this is a lot of paragraphs.)? What do you say at the end of the story, I can't say 'update soon'. Thank you for writing this? With much gratitude, C.B. :) |
agent000 chapter 25 . 12/16/2007 Lol! All aboard for fluff central! Hehehe...didn't expect that much fluff in a chapter coming from you, but I suppose that after two very long stories, you deserve a little fluff, lol. I'm just glad that you didn't go into more detail than that. For some odd reason, fluff can make me squirm at times, even if it's well-placed in a story, lol. *shakes head* Yeah, I haven't figured that one out myself. I realize that after all that time though that the animal inside Ed would probably be ready and raring to come out, even though no one expected or realized that Ed even had that side of him, lol. But anyway, it's good. It ended a little suddenly though, I must admit. Perhaps an epilogue would be nice, just to sort of tie things together and make the reader conclude "Okay, this really IS finished." Just a thought, lol, you don't have to take my suggestions, but I still think an epilogue would be nice. If you don't want people pestering you too much for a sequel, just make the epilogue vaguely cover the rest of the story so that the readers can see that there's nowhere else to go with it, so no need to bother one about it, hehe. That's what J. did at the end of her last book. It worked wonders to clue the reader into the fact that there seriously weren't going to be any more. Anyway, I'm rambling, hehe. I'll let you go for now. Take care, and have a nice day! Thanks for updating so fast! Melissa P.S. Congratulations, you finished this story in about, um...six months? That's not bad, considering how long people usually tend to leave their stories unfinished, hehe. Pat yourself on the back for that one. ;) |
Anime Angel Alchemist chapter 25 . 12/16/2007 Please go on! I absolutely love Robyn and Ed! I'm begging you to continue! T.T I really loved both A New Neighbor and A Srange Arrival! Some of the best I've read. |
agent000 chapter 24 . 12/15/2007 Lol, Roy to the rescue! *snickers* That was cute, him getting involved, hehe. He's more understanding than one would think when he has to be, and that's just adorable, hehe. Ed's getting all lovesick too. Wonder if that's going to cause problems? Lol, oh well. He'll figure them out, sooner or later. Also, is Roy ever going to figure out that Robyn is his grandaughter? He seems pretty oblivious, hehe. I'd like to know what his reaction would be to finding that out. Can't wait to see the next chapter, whatever it contains. Update soon if you can! |
Sasoridoll chapter 1 . 12/14/2007 I lik it so far. I have a long way 2 go since its the first chapter but it's good! |
Maira Luca chapter 24 . 12/14/2007 Ah, so cute. |
Kairi Angel has to go in a sec chapter 24 . 12/14/2007 Love how you spelled Fullmetal Alchemist wrong, Dori. And say taking a pis. Robyn's more mature than that. And would probably say that. "Could you please not do that?β Ed asked, suddenly frowning down at Robyn. She cocked her head to one side in confusion, so Ed explained, βItβs really weird to talk to someone who looks like my reflection and have them talk back in my voice.β It's like masturbation. :D I'll do comments at school. |
Sunfield chapter 23 . 12/4/2007 LOL, u absolutely left me with some more questionmarks every chap:P pls update soon:D |
agent000 chapter 23 . 11/26/2007 Lol, that certainly explains why she started diguising herself as Thomas. I'd been immensely curious about that, hehe. Now I'm curious about something else. Robyn mysteriously looks like Thomas. Is there a connection? Also, what's with this whole homunculus thing? Was someone supposed to resurrect Thomas or something so the homunculi thought that Robyn was the resurrected Thomas? *shakes head* A little confused, but intrigued. Update soon if you can. |
Kairi Angel chapter 22 . 11/25/2007 I'm taking pictures of the drawings from the binder so...they'll be on my deviant art soon enough. I need to get the newer ones up... and the drawings from the fanfic that never got in the binder. |
Bagel-chan chapter 22 . 11/13/2007 Bloody hell what were you thinking! I thought to said that there would only be to parts to Robyan's story? *cries* Gr please go on another typing spree *beggs* please! ~Bagel |
agent000 chapter 22 . 11/12/2007 Lol, I guess her story is a lot longer than you'd anticipated, hehe. Sometimes stories take a life of their own with me as well, so I can totally understand where you're coming from. At least this was good, and it had some important plot points in it. Hopefully you'll update again soon, so that we can get the NEXT part of her story, lol...hopefully you'll manage it all in the next chapter. ;) We'll see. Anyway, update soon! |