Though I don't like Isabel that much because I'm jealous- cough! cough! Ahem!
I just want to say that I enjoy reading this story. It's great and show any emotions too well. I like all their love and support for each other and for Leo, especially from Raph. Can't deny that this work is awesome! Thanks for sharing.

I have tears rolling down my cheeks right now. My cat must have known I was sad because he came over and laid down on my lap. I don't normally cry when I'm reading. I was at school the last time I did and my friends were concerned. Anyway, this is a good story.

This is a good story. I felt like I was going cry until I realized that the last thing Raph said to Leo was 'I hate you' Then I did cry. You're a good author if you can make me cry. Anyway, I love the story.

I never cry while reading and yet, though this is the third time I've read this story, I couldn't help but sobbing. Your characters seem very real and their reactions remain true to the originals. Like others, I am not too keen on romance, but the way you depicted their story and the effects of Leo's tragic loss are truly beautiful. Thanks for the story!

Okay I'm a die hard raphanardo fan and when it comes to stories where one of those two brothers are with someone else I tend to get overly jealous and stop readin the story overall. BUT your story was really hear warming. You got me a few times where I would tear up and I wasn't sure what was going to happen. And I honestly thought you were going to have Leo write about liking Raph in his journal but you shocked me with Isabel. I'll have you know even tho I'm a stubborn tcest fan you got me to read the rest of your story anyways! And you did a fantastic job with it

I admit, the romance bits aren't my favourite, but again, I think you were able to manage it better than most other stories I've read.

This was a decent fiction. There were a few parts that I felt strayed out of character, and a few that didn't seem as carefully written as others. But there were also parts that were pure brilliance.

You have some raw talent here. Still in need of some honing and practice, but who isn't, right? Well done.

I admit, I too am not a fan of that type of romance theme, simply due to it's overuse and (often) poor writing. But I think you managed to pull it off well enough.

Maybe slightly cliche, but it's something I could see happening to Leo. Well done.

Heartbreakingly sweet... in that it was heartbreaking and sweet at the same time.

can you please make a second one please
I love these types of storys

Oooowwhh thats sweet :')

Oh my god! This story was incredible! I loved it so much and how you added Isabel. Amazing story!

I find the story really amazing and great. But the only thing I find disappointing is the reason leo stayed behind longer than he was supposed to in central america. I mean I have no problem with leo having a romance. But I find it disconnects the story from the real problem that leo has over his brothers and how those problems drove him insane. It would have been much better if leo had met a young child reminiscent of his siblings that was killed or maybe you could've gone deeper into Leo's efforts in trying to save the village.

It would have been able to mirror of his problems. Like maybe whatever he did the black devils kept coming back and he was never able to ensure the safety of everyone in the village without casualty or the occasional death. It would have been interesting to go deeper on how instead of trying to solve his issues and realising there are some things he can't control it made him worse. The romance kind of disconnects real issues tht leo has that need to be addressed. It also kind of disconnects him from his relationship with his brother. I means the problems are not completely unrelated but there's not much connection so...

Continuing my review just seconds ago, I also want to mention that orange tabby cat that sounds like Klunk in some point. She sounds VERY suspicious. Was thinking that maybe it was Isabel and that she got reincarnated and stuff. I mean, you did mention that the cat went through abuse. And I guess what Isabel experienced that day when she was saved by Leo counts as abuse as well right? I dunno, just got a very weird feeling...

One of the BEST stories ever featuring Leo in that cursed jungle. Normally, I hate OCs. But Isabel and Sarah were surprisingly different. They didn't act a whole lot like Mary Sues, they acted more like themselves. It's cool. And I must say that the characters sometimes acted OOC, especially Leo, but amazingly, you just snap them right back into shape and here we are, stuck in their more familiar attitudes once again. I like how you do that. So flawlessly and stuff. Hope you continue making stories like these! :D

This is an amazing story! One of the best fanfictions I've ever read, actually! I also have a feeling that Hope could be Isabel... I don't know why though.