You did a really good job of capturing the character's voices.

Awwww, the dinosaurs... *sniff*

"This is against the natural order!" Teehee! I really usually don't like Rayne, but this is pretty great. :D

i think the bit with zoe was my favorite. wonderful job.

very nice!

Awe! Oh so very sweet! Really enjoyed it!

I think i almost cried-beautiful story, and cute :) As it happens, i agree with River about Cotton Candy :P

Aaw! Heartbreaking but really thoughtful insight into how Zoe's feeling. I like that she's healing though. I also like how you wrote Mal in this chapter, he was really playful and generally amusing! I thought the last chapter was just a one-shot so I was pleasantly surprised to see this, and I'm looking forward to the next piece!

Very sweet and fluffy, just like cotton candy! ;) Nice job.

Aaw, so cute! River's voice was really well done particularly. And I have no trouble imagining Kaylee winning herself the stuffed animals and making Simon carry them. Great stuff!