Reviews for Armilla II
hahahanna chapter 40 . 11/9/2019
Just finished reading this story but I'm assuming you won't be finishing it? :'(
Anonymous chapter 40 . 10/6/2019
Please continue the story! I love your story and relationship building!
Guest chapter 40 . 9/8/2019
I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU DIDNT FINISH IT brb crying
Guest chapter 40 . 10/31/2018
I hope this story gets finished some day. It’s really good.
Zuffi21 chapter 40 . 9/25/2018
I need the end :( please
Jessenia22 chapter 40 . 6/23/2018
Really love this story. I know its been 5 years since you updated, but hopefully someday you will. :)
Big Fan chapter 40 . 4/27/2018
Fantastic continuation! I like her dating a George, was kind of hoping for Harry. I love the banter between Docky, Morag and Snape. It is hilarious. Do hope your writing is still going strong :)
Jasmine chapter 40 . 3/15/2018
Would you finish the story? Are you still reading message?
I just want to say thank you to you for you give the man I loved a little warm in his last time.
My English is really poor,I hope want I write is want I mean…
Dr.Zimmerman chapter 40 . 11/6/2017
Hey, Dunno if you ever going to continue this story but just wanted to say that this story (first and second) was amazing! I really loved the relationship between the siblings. It was a fascinating story that held my up all night and I couldn't let it go without finishing it in one go. If I have to give critic then it would be that Severus was too controlling and demanding, What I mean with that is that he was pretty much always supposed to be in the right, controlling about everything Armilla did, or for example how long her hair should be, ravening about how Armillas attitude or snarky speech was not acceptable (while Sev's was) etc. What I did love though resulting this was Severus moments of attempt to apologies, it showed his humble and caring side, A side his sister was only in favor of seeing.
I also have to say that I loved when Sev became anguished when his sister was in mortal danger. I think it would have been amazing to (in a separate fiction) read and see Severus version of Armillas kidnapping and every other danger situation she so often found herself in.

Well anyway thanks for an fantastic fanfic-story. /Z.
yuu chapter 40 . 6/24/2017
Hey, I found "Armilla" just a few days ago and I've become so addicted, that I read all of it in less than a week I love your story, especially Armilla, I love that you focus on the sibling reletionship between Armilla and Severus. It was really interesting to read how they grew closer. I'm a fan of the weasley twins, that's why I was just too happy with Armilla/George. I thnk they are great together. I guess, bonus is that Severus somewhat likeshe twins, or at least respecs their abilties.
Oh god, I have no words for Rougier. I hate that hag! She awkoe a darks side in me.. I copuldn't care less about her lossing a child.. i may be a horrible person for thinking like that, but just imagining, what she would do having Aurelius child. Still i think it would be a weird family, all the siblings being 17 to twentysomthing years appart.
I like how you portayed the father, I may be a sentimental Hufflepuff, but I can't hate him. He is a horrible person and I hope to never meet someone like him in real life, but he loved his daughter in his weird way, even if he didn't knew her at all. I'm interested who is responsible for his death. I thought it was Rougier, but it was the too oblivous choice. Maybe death eaters.
I'm not sure what to think about Draco and Lydia. I can see Dumbledore doing somethng like this, but it's still a little weird for me. Maybe because there wasn't too much about it.
I liked Harry in this story. And I like how you handled his realtionship with the Snape siblings. i was glad that he didn't become immedately friends with Armilla, when they were at grimmauld place.
Sooo.. I don't now if you ever read this comment, but I how many others in the comment section encourage you to think about continiuing "Armilla". It's somewhat a shame to abond it after you poured so much time and effort into it. Still, thanks for the great (even if uncomlete) story!
Greetings from Austria ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2017
I'm a Chinese as wonderful your story is!I'v read part of your brilliant story,and I hope that I can finish reading it after my College Enterance Examination.
ThisIsAGuest chapter 40 . 1/1/2017
New Years Resolution: Keep the hope alive that this story will continue on this year!
ThisIsAGuest chapter 40 . 9/8/2016
I can't tell you how many times I've read Armilla 1 & 2. Very beautifully written stories with amazing, infuriating, lovable, real characters from your creation and the Harry Potter world. Each time I come to the last chapter here, I hope I'm gonna see an update. Please, please, PLEASE don't leave this story unfinished! Hope you update soon!
PasterPast chapter 16 . 8/16/2016
I am so sorry that I just sent the wrong review to Armilla by mistake-yeah me the guest. After all I am a Chinese and not good at English. So try to forgive me if I set any sentences wrong. And actually there was one Chinese who asked you to let him or her translate this fantastic novel into Chinese. And with pleasure I have read a part of it. The most important reason is that the translater was giving the translation at a slow speed. It has been 5 years since then and we haven't finished it. So I'd like to ask if you can let me translate it with another girl. We are all students but we will try our best to do it on our vacation. I had asked the translater for permission but he or she hasn't answered. Thanks!
And also here is what I want to say: I was thinking about if the Professor here was too gentle and soft. He could hold his sister's hands so easily, hug her so simply,and say something not so sweet but can touch ones heart. Then I just thought I'm ridiculous. He is a Proffesor who is always strict, steering or something like that, but all in all he is just a real man. A REAL man! He had the strong love of responsibility to Lily in almost his whole life, and now it comes to our little Armilla, defferent, but still ALWAYS.
The only thing I want to say is that it is brilliant and warm. So can you just keep on working it out? We all hope to read it to the end. But still a lot thanks!
All of them are so Cuuuuuuuute!
Guest chapter 38 . 7/20/2016
Fabulous ! Memorable characters. Keep writing, we are waiting for the next few chapters!
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