I loved this book I just wished u would of who it was she loved

So far, I believe the characters have been very OOC. I think the plot itself is very improbable. I mean, yeah, it's fanfiction, but the way you portrayed the characters couldn't be farther from the truth. It's true about the way people underestimate and degrade Sakura, but I think you've stretched it too far, overexaggerated it, and made it too unrealistic in regards to the anime itself (crackfic is a whole other matter). Ya know what I mean? Also, your spelling and grammar can use some improvement. No hate

Very beautiful ending. So sweet and perfect and I for the life of me, can't decide which guy to go with. Probably Shino, because he noticed first, or Gaara because they were so close and he wasn't fooled. Or Naruto, because he would need it the most. Or Kakashi, who would need it just as much. But, se la vi. It was beautiful.

Who's the guy?!

The ending gives me Akatsuki no Yona vibes, and im loving them. xx

This was so good but the metaphor was so cringe because Moths Aren't Poisonous! Why does everyone think they are? They are only toxic it if you eat them after they eat something toxic to us!
sorry had to get that off my chest. Hope there won't be too many moth references in the next chapter hahaha..

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Tbh I legit thought this chapter was Sasuke's reaction when he came back to the village. I reread the chapter and tried to imagine Gaara instead

A little difficult to read, but all together a good read.

-EA