FINALLY! TOBIS ON TOP!\()/

I am always sooo skeptical of Akatsuki fics. People tend to make them lovesick puppies a forget that they're ninja. I liked this one a lot. I could see something like this being a longer *cough* story. :)

oh tobi, you really are a good boy... *drooling*

This pairing is sexy and the shower scene makes it even sexier. 3 Good job done. ]

:)

Smiling, he gently brushed Tobi's matted bangs off of his forehead and watched him dream, felt him breathe.

"You're a good boy."

Perhaps his death, and those shower curtains, could wait.

Awwww..*melts*

* nosebleed* love it!

aaw, that's so sweet V i squeed thats so adorably cute

I keep forgetting how much taller Tobi is.

Oh dear gosh, my innocent little Tobi! D:

I really do like this story. It was written tastefully, which isn't something you see quite often in the world of fanfiction.

I do think, however, the story was better off being left right before the break at the first "You're a good boy, Tobi," and have the rest left to the imagination.

Yum. I am loving your DeiTobi fics! :D

"Perhaps his death, and those shower curtains, could wait."

...Cutest. line. ever. 3

Seriously, this was adorable. And hot. And a little bit melancholy, but wonderfully so. I really liked it~

aw so sweet!

nice I loved it you did a really good job with this one shot

sarina

Kawaii~! x3

Uh, not much to say that has already been said...

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